I'm Dating The Ice Princess

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Description

She's a transferee. . . .

She's the heartless player. . . .

Will the player win ? or will the transferee change the ending of the game ?

Foreword

This is my first one-shot so i don't think it will be good haha . I hope you like this :)) and let me remind you English is not my first language ^•^

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ASandstorm
#1
Chapter 1: Well, there are a few mistakes, which is normal of course :) and maybe it's just me being a little picky but there was one or two sentences that were slightly confusing but nothing more ^^
For first time writing an oneshot And in a foreign language it's pretty good, trust me, i saw things... *shivers* eheheh
But seriously, you're brave ahahah and it is good, could have a little more but that's just me eheh ^^ furthermore with practice you'll get better :) just keep writing and one day you'll see you improved without even noticing
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