These Feelings... (A Short Story)

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After their first encounter, she hated him. She despised him. She never wanted to see him again. But life doesn't always comply.

Foreword

This is a four-part series I wrote a couple weeks ago, but I'm uploading it as a story~

This short story features Kim Junsu of DBSK and Lee Jinsang (OC)~ Please enjoy and be sure to leave a comment! They really make my day. :)

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Chocolatemushrooms #1
This is interesting :)
Great story!
yulkris #2
these feelings!! this is a great story1!
wanqiloh #3
OMG THIS IS SUCH A GOOD SERIES!! SEQUEL! i actually cried! T.T
tawphawt #4
OMAIGAT, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL -_- U WANT US TO DIE BECAUSE OF CURIOSITY?? >.<
Hyunyellow #5
Loved it :3
Kallen_Langely #6
@CindyQuil: XDDD Thank you for reading~ Hahaha, I'm still debating over whether or not to write a sequel, but I guess time will tell~ (I have all summer to write one if I decide to... :P)
JongKey1221 #7
SEQUEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M DYING FOR IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />
Okay, first, it's a cute story. I love the way Junsu and Jinsang fight all the time. It's just like me and my forever rival Andrew Thomas. (He does something to me, I slap him as hard as I can >:D) But recently, I've been feeling something towards him. It all started on May 14th when everyone in band in the school went to World's of Fun...<br />
Haha! Umm, ANYWAAAYYY... Reason two for liking this story is because of the details you ahve. THere are so many and it really inspires me to do better in my stories. Mine are always so dull and cardboard-ish - stiff.<br />
And finally, reason three, IT'S AMAZING ENOUGH TO NEED A FREAKING SEQUEL.<br />
Please!! I'm begging you! Make a sequel! DX
musicxlife #8
gah i re-read the ending and it still bugs me. hmph :P
musicxlife #9
lol sry :P *laughs at the length of yours in return* and yeah... i'm a pretty chatty person, thus commenter :D btw just out of curiosity.. what year were you born in? i'm a '95 :] idk i always ask ppl these things :P<br />
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lol i didnt rly take time.. i just blurted every spazzms moment i had :P hahas. <br />
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oh hi rochelle :D so u could ignore my other comment abt what to call you... somewhere.. either in the other stories or at ur home page.. whatever they're called cuz laksjd i'm a lost cause at this site :P<br />
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LOL OMG I KNOW RIGHT IT'S LIKE.. INSTEAD OF EXERCISING TO MAKE UR HEART RATE GO UP JUST SPAZZ ABOUT SOMETHING :D SO MUCH MORE EFFICIENT *bricked* :DDD<br />
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OMG I AM ACTUALLY LAUGHING TO MYSELF READING UR RESPONSE. HAHAS. SO AS A WRITER YOU ENJOY BRINGING CONFUSION TO OTHER PEOPLE DUE TO UNCLEAR ENDINGS? WELL THEN :P OMGOMGOGOMGO JUST SAW UR COMMENT AND OOHHHHHMMYYYGOOOODDDSSSUNNN YES SEQUELL PLEASEEEEEEE :DDDDDDDDDDDD<br />
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thank you for writingggg :D oh man i smiled so wide reading the comment :P
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