Prologue: Colors

A Piece of Heaven
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Everything was as dull, as sluggish and as plain disgusting as it could have been. The fake city lights shifting their colors from red to orange and the yellow, to return to painfully red and fade into screaming orange, dying out as sickening yellow. The colors made TaekWoon sick - the whole pallet of them. From pastel blue to navy, from faded mint green to the moss green - the color of the bottle laying next to him on the floor along with its sisters of the same color. How many where there? Three? Four? Five? Ten? He had lost count too long ago to remember.

 

The neck of the the emerald green bottle rested against his lips, the transparent liquid flowing over his lips, burning down his throat and leaving a sweet, almost putridly sweet taste behind. He didn’t really feel the burn nor the taste, he just remembered it, just like touches, kisses, smiles, laugh, a voice that still echoed in his head every day. And he loved every single memory his mind forced on him.

 

The blinding white, the warm chocolate brown, the soft russet brown,

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tayzia #1
Chapter 9: ahh, i cant believe i cried! it was so sad, but very good. thank you, for writing this!♡
xingcha #2
Chapter 9: :( why did you make it so sad? :(
at least they will live happily from now on~
please write a fluffy chaptered fic to heal my broken heart
onewlover4 #3
Chapter 9: I cried so hard :'( because when Hongbin got sick and need to leave Taekwoon and the past of Taekwoon was very very sad :( waaaaaahhhhhhh I really really Love this very much author-nim ^_^ I will miss this story very much huhuhuh :'( I'm happy that they we're both happy together and really meant for each other <3 Thank you very very much author-nim :) I will wait for your new LeoBin love story <3 ^_^ this made my day complete and my bad vibes gone :D
Haneul97 #4
Chapter 9: That must've been really hard , too hard that it induced such a melancholic Taekwoon dead from the inside but breathing and surviving soullessly for 4 years . I assumed it was this sad and depressing but knowing the actual reason had me even sadder :( again, only someone as celestial and angelic as Hongbin , with so much vibrance and peace in him, could cure most if not all the darkness that swallowed him up. I couldn't have asked for a better ending . They're both happier and will continue to be by each other's side always <3 thank you so much
missing_vixx #5
Chapter 9: *cries* Uwah, that is so sad... Having so all his loved ones gone in a flash. It must be really painful... But he has Hongbin now, all is well.
Momoleee #6
Chapter 9: This was so beautiful. I love the way you write. Thank you for such an amazing story!!
NebulaStream #7
Chapter 9: I just love and admire so much the way you write. I had and still follow your stories. Thank you for always bringing such wonderful Leobin fics; they make me love leobin more than I already do. I'll wait for future fics and updates-especially from Steal Heart that I love so much.
LazyLlama199 #8
Chapter 8: That was such a beautiful ending ;-;
missing_vixx #9
Chapter 8: TT___TT Beautiful ending. Hongbin gave up his wings to be with Taekwoon. I love the way Taekwoon's pain was portrayed, how his world became more and more grey and dull, how he could no longer know what to do without Hongbin. At the start where you wrote about him waking up to nothing, going on with his daily life with that empty feeling, it felt really emotional. I have this feeling that I am standing there, watching whatever you wrote come together before me. It's a wonderful feeling. This ending gives me a warm feeling and while it is a happy one, I still felt sadness at certain parts of this chapter. I don’t know, it's complicated I guess. Lastly, thank you for writing this wonderful story! I look forward to the epilogue and hopefully I will be able to handle whatever you intend to write. *sends you lots of hugs* ^^
Haneul97 #10
Chapter 8: I couldn't have asked for anything more . This is more than what we all wanted and craved for . Actually .. Even if it ended sadly , i wouldn't have minded much (strangely since I can't take angst at all) mainly because the way you explained their love and connection was so , so beautiful nothing else mattered. But no, you just had to make it all the more breath taking and have them reunited in the touching, almost realistic way ever. The way you describe the weather , Taekwoon's life without Hongbin - sad and grey , greyer than ever but he still lived because he trusted Hongbin as much. He was dead but lived for that promise. The way you painted the images in my mind , and bonus long haired Taekwoon had me screaming " yes" while kicking the wall because I love it and it definitely suited the concept/situation here. Hongbin descending from heaven, broken wings but mended heart. I swear I just can't explain how that scene played in my head so .... Vividly. Nothing seemed fictional when I saw it clear in my head. Hongbin yet again sacrifices himself, his immortality, for his lover who happens to be a mere human . He becomes a human being but remains an angel in Taekwoon's mind because he is at heart, he didn't need wings nor powers to set him as celestial . He was Taekwoon's own miracle just by breathing air into him and filling him with all the love by one glance .

I love you so much for making this story . I'm so sad yet so happy it's all finished but I'll just wait for the epilogue <3 <3 thank you ;-; (I officially have a thing for your metaphors )
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