Chapter 1: Wow! I clicked on the story because I thought it sounded interesting. I didn't even look at the authors name until I was finished, and once I did, I found it oddly familiar. I finished your story Streak of Light not that long ago, but I'm only just making the connection that you're that author!
Anyways, this story is fantastic. There is much deep and heartfelt emotion inside that I always long for when I read. I have to say, I think you've even improved on your actual writing style since Streak of Light (and it was very good then). It is written very fluidly, which made it delightful to read. I really like that it is so emotional even though it's only a one-shot. The character development in this is great; I love how straightforward and real Chanyeol is in it.
Amazing job again overall! You're one of my favourite authors on here already. ^.^ I'm anticipating more awesomeness in the future. Have a nice day :)
Chapter 1: This so beautiful. ..
I don't want it to end here
It would be nice if you continue to write about what would happen to baekhyun
Where are they going and so on
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