A Coincidence (SHINee FanFic)

Description

By chance, you find yourself wrapped in the exciting and new world that is the music business.

With the help of your new-found friends, you become determined to make it to the top.

Struggling to maintain friendships in two different countries while working hard for a big company keeps you very busy...

Will rumours break your relationships apart, or will others break them for you?

Who will be the one by your side through it all?

(Can also be read on wattpad at: https://www.wattpad.com/story/50691857-shinee-coincidence-a-shinee-fanfic

       ~Disclaimer~
I do not own the cover picture

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JordiePi
#1
Chapter 6: Coming back and reading this about a year later... I still really like this story, I just wanted to give a little constructive criticism, if that's alright. Your writing style in these first few chapters (this is as far as I've re-read so far, so I'm only commenting on the story up to this point) seems a little fast-paced, though the story line runs smoothly. For a beginning writer, this isn't that much of a problem, though, and I sometimes struggle with pacing as well. I just wanted to suggest that in future stories, you read through and think about what things you can add to the story that make it run at a more believable speed. Please understand that I'm just trying to be helpful, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I do really enjoy this story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it!

~Jordan
JordiePi
#2
Chapter 3: Oh wow, this is soo good! I'm hyperventilating with excitement... Breathe Jordan...

But seriously, this is really good!
herejusttoread #3
Chapter 20: Was excited when I saw your update. Such a good story. Fighting !!!
herejusttoread #4
Chapter 19: Wahh the story is so good. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next one .