Title: (4/5)
Yes, it is eye-catching. It also fits in the plot of the story just that it was quite long but nevertheless it was still an eye catching title!

Description/Foreward: (9/10)
I must say, the foreward is really interesting! It has this questionnare that makes people want to read more! It also briefly explains about the characters of the story. There is also and introduction of the story which will make people want to read more!

Plot: (8/10)
The plot isn't too common and quite different. 

Poster: (4/5)
The poster is really nice and they put the main character bigger and the rest of Block B as smaller backgrounds. Also the touch of the ribbon is very cute.

Chapter Titles: (2/5)
It only stated chapter numbers instead of what really is happening.

Flow: (13/15)
The flow is really constant and not too confusing for some.

Grammer/Spelling: (18/20)
There isn't much of grammer errors but there are only a few spelling errors though.

Total enjoyment: (12/15)
Although im not a big fan of Block B but this story is really interesting!

Total: (70/90)
The story is really nice and also I hope you could improve in the minor miastake of your spellings (: