The Legends

Monster Thief
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"What a shame we all become such fragile and broken things..." 

It must have been years since Taecyeon and Chansung had given him a chance- the two that were like his brothers now. Wooyoung smirked, his eyes still the same blackholes as it had been in his fragile years of a middle schooler. Those were many a years ago- now Wooyoung was either almost over twenty, or actually twenty. Another flick of his wrist- a clean slash gave way for crimson black liquid to leap to the ground. A frown itched its way to the man's face. It didn't matter how old he was now- Shadow Walkers live far longer than a human, apparently- but that's what Taecyeon said, and his words weren't always valid. Some warm drops landed on the side of Wooyoung's face. A revolting sensation. Yet the contrast of the fair white skin and staining red created a lovely picture that was surely from ethereal origins. Except it wasn't- and the young adult absentmindedly wiped it off, still stuck deep inside his memories. His slim fingers slid easily across the rough texture of his necklace- and a familiar glow shone as it made contact with the heavy body of the Rank A. Wooyoung wiped the filthy blood off his trusty blade (old fashioned, yes) and tucked it into his belt made of the leathery wings the Rank A monsters relinquished before their doom. Wooyoung plucked a clean cloth from his jean pocket and wiped his delicate fingers free of the grit that clung to his hands. The man with soft hands quietly knelt down, tentatively poking at the disturbed shadows, before a smile finally blossomed on his face as the shadows responded happily, curving around Wooyoung's skin, playing tag across the stretches of pale skin. The smile brightened even the darkest corners of the clearing, and Wooyoung's face dimpled into that of a charming child. But the heavy weight of thoughts pulled the young adult under. The bright and rare angelic smile also was also dragged under, and the apporaching shadows became timid and shy once more. 

Wooyoung hadn't changed much- still the same innocent look, same untrusting eyes, still beautifully pale skin, pink soft lips, and still the same feminine hips that gave off the impression of extreme delicacy that Wooyoung used to his advantage. But he wasn't as slim as before- his lean arms were slightly rippled with muscles, and his quite slender legs had grown longer. And his knowledge had impeccably shot up so high, so fast, that he was on par with Chansung and Taecyeon's knowledge together combined. But Wooyoung was far from being superior, nor did he think he was. No- Wooyoung knew that Chansung and Taecyeon had years of experience on them- and that couldn't compare to his artificial book smarts. The shadows tugged at Wooyoung's fingers, demanding attention from the silent Shadow Walker. Wooyoung lifted the corner of his lips in empty giddiness, and the corners of his eye crinkled as his fingers gave a last twirl before leaving the black pool. The shadows clinging to his hands fell off like water as he shook them off as gently as he could. He rose back up, and his back stiffened into a defensive stance. 

A quick sensory scan and seeing the shadows at ease meant that his target wasn't anywhere near. A shuddering sigh of relief tore itself from Wooyoung's chest. The unknown feeling of anticiaption and dread had crept upon him without his noticing. A weak grin bleed through the white canvas of Wooyoung's face. 

JYP's new targets had shifted- Rank C's and B's no longer sufficed since the break-out of information that had flown to their nation- sent from their spies in their enemy's field. They had succeeded in making the experiments- their PROJECTS that turned normal, unaware humans into the gruesome, ugly monsters that only did their master's bidding had evolved- they succeeded in making the real monsters they had been looking for the whole time. This had given the JYP nation despair and later, hope. Because now they were desperate enough to piece the bits of stolen information from the enemy's home base to formulate the crazy notion that the Rank S monsters still retained humane qualities, and JYP was going send out their most reliable and skilled agents to kidnap the monsters, and steal them from the opposing force. 

Wooyoung trudged away from the sight of the clearing, walking aimlesly a couple yards away from where he had executed the most perfect kill in this week. The pale boy stopped. Shifting his black orbs around at the frozen trees and still wind, his feet began digging into the black mass below him, his shadows letting off faint protests before finally giving up- and Wooyoung slid into the silky black and entered the void. A sound of contentment bubbled out of his chest, and the innocent looking boy leisurely took the time to fully enjoy the pleasure of the silken comfort before waving and slithering his way through the smooth black to th

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GOING THROUGH MASSIVE EDITING (7/4/16)

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 4: I love the quote that you opened the story with. It's beautiful and helps the reader to feel a great deal of emotion before we even begin reading. I think the 'Before Entering the Room' is a bit redundant since you establish that first thing with the next couple paragraphs, but your descriptions in this partial chapter are lovely! They evoke a great many feelings and images in my head so that the scenery and the way the story unfolds is almost surreal and visceral. That last paragraph in particular is pretty much sublime and it's amazing! I was frustrated when that was where you stopped it. haha

Given that I don't know much of your other works and it's been a while since I read the first chapters, I'm not sure how much help I'd be in comparing but I do know that this chapter feels rather underwhelming and incomplete. For me, it was a letdown that Wooyoung appeared to have no chance whatsoever when he approached his target. Given how you've built the Shadow Walkers up, I was expecting some sort of ability or resistance and that just didn't happen. Even if he is going up against an S level target, aren't they supposed to be the elites? So I pretty much snorted when he practically fell through the doorway and was then subsequently marched along with no trouble at all. >.> Hmm... It almost feels like it was a setup in the first place, and it might be, but because I only have a glimpse, I don't know.

I don't mean for that to be discouraging because I did enjoy reading it and as the commenter below stated, I wonder very much why the Siren will choose not to kill Wooyoung to promote the WooKay pairing. I'm also curious how the other Shadow Walkers are faring and how everything is going to unfold. You've certainly got my attention and I will definitely continue to read. *nod* With that being said, great job in getting this far and I wish you the best of luck with finishing this chapter and the rest of the story in a personally satisfactory manner. ^_^
Piyoungie__11
#2
Chapter 4: Great job author-san! I really enjoyed your style of writing
I'm looking forward to the WooKay development and I hope you have ChanHo and TaecKhun's battles in store for us as well ^^

Keep up the good work, fighting~ <3
hwootestjang #3
Chapter 4: Yeay they meet finally!! The time has begun
Amalya
#4
This is an interesting concept and a fascinating look into another world. I'm certainly curious as to how the boys are Shadow Walkers like that and if it's random or there's something that makes them that way, but how you're building the world up is quite intriguing. I like the idea of Wooyoung having an old fashioned weapon like a sword (that never gets old) and seeing the way they're all three different in the same field is also intriguing.

The idea of speaking to shadows is something pretty cool and though I'm a bit confused about the competition and the way in which they're apparently creating these PROJECTS, the dichotomy between the 'good' guys and the 'other' guys is definitely creating some tension. I was a teensy bit confused about the way you explained capturing and killing the different ranks: is there a difference and if so, what is it? haha

And now with this latest twist, I'm certainly curious to see how this will be a WooKay fic given the recent development. There's gotta be something to the S Rank beasties and possibly Wooyoung in particular that make it possible but I'll be damned if I know what it is yet. I guess time will tell but I at least wanted to drop a comment and say I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Good job with getting it started and good luck in finishing it!
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 3: Okay I am very much loving this. Thank you for writing this story for me!!! <3
hwootestjang #6
Chapter 3: I am very much in love with this. Yes, I am so pleased and excited for next.
2PM2PM2PM
#7
Chapter 2: Oooh, I absolutely loved the descriptions for the rank S monsters! Junho was a bit creepy :S But I can so see Nichkhun as the 'Angel' and Minjun's description was Awesome! And I loved the name changing lol!

But now I don't know if I should be excited or scared over what happens next. Probably a bit of both!
2PM2PM2PM
#8
Chapter 1: oooh, already it's so interesting and original!

And I love the facr that chansung thought woo wss pretty kkkk he sooo has a crush on him :)

anywho, great story! I look forward to more :)