light me up (to keep me sane)

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Memories linger like the smoke that clings to Minseok’s body. Likewise, he has finally found his reason to stop smoking.

warning: character death

Foreword

originally for seokmonsters fic exchange.

will be updating my livejournal with more stories.

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lesleyluna #1
What happened to luhan?
Arashika #2
Chapter 1: "Don't stop as long as I'm here"

Oh man... Your description says Minseok's found his reason to stop smoking, but I suspect he won't truly be able to let the cigarettes go until they find out why Luhan died, until he comes to terms with what happens and lets Luhan go.

I'm so curious! What were they involved in? Why did Luhan die? The fact that he left Minseok a message means he knew he was going to die, and soon, and he knew that Minseok would be able to find his message. They're a criminal group, from the looks of things, but what did Luhan get himself into???

I loved the OT6 interactions ;n; all of them comforting each other, supporting each other, always looking out for each other, my heart hurts TAT Will we see more in this universe?

I might suggest putting in line breaks or some kind of delineation between memories and the present, I got lost in a few places where the transition wasn't quite clear OTL maybe that's just me, though.

This was a wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us!

Great job, keep writing~