Chapter 1: Although there are a lot of stories sharing the same themes as your story, i found yours to be one of the few that really moved me. Good job author :))
Chapter 1: Aw, this so sad, even though I expected it. And omg, the fact she knew that if she did all that she wrote in the bucket list, she would overexert herself; yet she didn't tell kai because that's what she really wanted to do. If he knew, he probably wouldn't have let her... but at least she managed to truly live again, and enjoy her final moments before her death so she wouldn't regret anything before her time is up. After all, everyone dies... and I'm glad she chose not to be full of regrets. I guess that end made it somehow less saddening :')
Chapter 1: Omg. I swear I almost cry like the tears were about to flow.. But I hold it back cause their love/friendship are very special. I've never read any oc died so first time for me. But srsly your story line was daebak! Quite sad though jihyun died that fast.. Poor jong in *filling the canyon with my sudden flash-tears* too bad their relationship stop till there only.. If she has a longer life.. I bet they be dating now {imagination} nx story to read ^^
Chapter 1: What. The. Hell. *throws tablet away* Seriously, every time I reread the ending I can't help but get hit by a bulldozer of feels again and again. I knew it was predictable, and the ending was hinted as much from the very beginning, but it's just so sad and I feel so much sympathy for Jongin and Jihyun. It's too bad that her list of firsts was too short, because I think she could have enjoyed life much more if she made it longer and spent more time with Jongin. But I guess her illness really was too much for her, huh. I'm sad their relationship couldn't escalate any further, and it would have been sweeter and much more stronger since they started off as really good friends. Oh my god, imagine if you made this longer and they actually got together, I probably would be dying from the angst and the sadness. It's good you cut the story with your ending, because it's so much more realistic than her actually ... you know ... by a miracle. God, how can I comment without spoiling this? Jongin is such a sweetypie, and I can only imagine the pain in his heart afterwards. He gave so much effort to make Jihyun happy, and to make Jihyun achieve everything that was in her bucket list. Seriously. How many stories have I already read that you were the author? I'll probably have to subscribe to ALL of your stories soon.
Chapter 1: Aww!! I love this so much :') I love OC fanfics, but I don't usually read One-Shots. However, this story was an exception because it's so beautiful and bittersweet!! ^^
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