Birthday Surprise

A normal surfer girl? Not even close..
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5 months later..

 

 

 

 

"Hyung.. are we finished yet?" Zico panted.

"Nope, you still have 15 minutes left. Keep going!" G-Dragon replied.

Block B groaned in response as they sprinted back and forth along the court. Big Bang all sat on the side watching as the younger group continued running around the court. Each of them sipping cups of coffee to get over their jet lag. Seungri threw a empty water bottle at a sleeping B-Bomb who fell to the floor with a loud thump.

"Ouch.." He mumbled.

Seungri scoffed. "B-Bomb stop being lazy!" He shouted. Taeil rubbed his hands together. "Can we please go out it's ~~~'s birthday! I still need to wrap her present!" He pleaded.

"You all can leave as soon as you finish those laps I told you to finish earlier!" G-Dragon snapped.

B-Bomb huffed and kicked the nearest object which was a basketball. ~~~ entered the large practice room just at that moment. The ball hurled her direction causing ~~~ to duck out of the way as it crashed into the racks. She narrowed her eyes. "Who did that?"

B-Bomb yelped as he hid behind P.O. Seungri lazily slung an arm across her shoulder, "What brings my cute dongsaeng down to the training rooms?"

She held up a bag full of food. "I brought you boys some snacks."

He grinned, "Aw thank you~"

~~~ glanced over at the boys. "What did they do this time?"

"They almost destroyed your ca-" Taeyang slapped a hand over Daesung's mouth before he could say anything more. ~~~ eyed him funnily but decided to shrug it off.

TOP rose to his feet and approached the younger. He eyed her mischievously before a smirk appeared on his face. "~~~-ah I heard it was your birthday." TOP smiled holding out a plush doll. "Happy Birthday."

She gasped, "Thank you Top oppa!"

He nodded patting her on the head. ~~~ turned to Seungri with curious eyes. "Oppa where is your gift?"

Seungri shakily chuckled. "M-My gift?" He cleared his throat. Her smile dropped, "Oppa, you said you wouldn't forget my birthday this year! You promised." ~~~ fussed.

"Sorry dongsaeng, maybe next time." He suggested.

*Beep! Beep! Beeeeeeep!* Her phone ran with a text from Yuri.

~~~ huffed. "Looks like I have to get going now. I have a competition today."

Seungri quickly grabbed ~~~'s hand. He pouted, "Your not angry at oppa.. Right?" He faked a sniffle. ~~~ smiled and shook her head. "Of course not oppa. It's not your fault you forgot, I should understand since you all just came back from overseas." She brightened wrapping her arms tightly around his waist.

He smiled and returned the hug. ~~~ turned to the others and waved, "I'm leaving. Don't overwork those boys understood?"

"Yes!" They replied.

"Oh, and B-Bomb!"

"Y-Yes?" He stuttered.

"I know that was you who kicked that ball." She smirked.

B-Bomb sheepishly rubs the back of his head. ~~~ chuckles before turning back to Seungri. "I'll see you later." He nods as ~~~ finally left.

TOP whacked Daesung on the head with a rolled up magazine. "Aish you almost ruined the surprise!" He snapped. Daesung innocently shrugged, "I'm sorry it slipped!"

G-Dragon turned around and smirked. "Good job lying about forgetting." He says giving a thumbs up. Seungri chuckles. "Thank you. Only a person with skill could pull off a lie like that." He says pretending to flip his hair.

"Oh boy." G-Dragon rolled his eyes. "Someone sure is cocky."

 

 

 

 

 

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The Choi agency had recently finished their renovations with the new money coming in from the boys. Everyone gathered in the lounge area moving furniture and paintings to different rooms. Upstairs the boys passed each other in the halls taking out and putting in new games in the rooms.

"How much more longer do we have to help?" Sungyeol whined. "I'm tired."

"Stop complaining." Key rolled his eyes.

Jonghyun and Minho placed the last couch in it's new spot. Mrs. Choi looked around and nodded in approval. She smiled, "Good job boys. That's all for the day."

Woohyun collapsed on the nearest chair with a loud groan. "Finally!" He exclaimed.

"Does that mean we can go shopping now? I still have to get ~~~ a birthday present!" Niel grumbled. CAP raised an eyebrow. "I thought you were going to get that last week." He questioned.

Niel frowned. "I forgot.."

Mrs. Choi turned to Changjo. "Did you buy her something?"

He nodded. "It took sometime to find because every store I went to didn't have the right price range that I was looking for. The cheapest one's looked like plastic." He shook his head. Her eyebrows rose in interest. "You bought her something expensive?" She asked shocked.

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Cutie_Panda
#1
I havent finished it but its sooooo good so far !!! ~Fighting~
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 65: When ~~~~~ woke up the first thing that came intO my mind was awkward~ somehow it sounded awkward for me because ~~~~ is at the hospital and changjo's mom is taking care of her.... I wonder what she ask ~~~~...
Anyways.............. Update soon~~~ ^^ ♥♡
extraordinarygill
#3
Chapter 64: Ahhh so sorry dongsaengie for the late comment..haven't been logging in >.<
Anyway, hahaha this chapter was kinda funny. Their conversations are always filled with so much fun and laughter :D Aigooo L.Joe and his Casanova mind keke. Ricky and his food..keke ^^ They're so adorable.
Ahhhh I was actually hoping Changjo wouldn't go for the party so that he could be the first person ~~~ would see when she wakes up. Aww.. But nonetheless, Changjo needs to relieve some stress from all the worrying-for-his-girl syndrome. Kyaaaa >.<
Omg I actually really thought ~~~'s condition deteoriated!! But SHE WOKE UP!!! Yipeeee!!! :D finally! Everybody was so worried sick for her... >.<
Ahh I really really LOVE mrs Choi.. She is such a sweet and motherly lady. Looks like I was really wrong about her at the start..
Hmm... Wae is the story marked completed?? Please don't tell me it ended already dongsaeng ah... :( I still wanna see more of the couple's moment.. Please...i want more!! So update soon!! Hahaha I can't bear to see this story completed.. ^^
KellyKiller #4
Chapter 64: omg for moment I thought that she'd dies and then yeah......GREAT STORY :)
BenaiferCHOI
#5
Chapter 63: Please dont kill her or Chanjo oppa will come and hurt you ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
please update soon ^^
extraordinarygill
#6
Chapter 63: Ahhh my goodness!! After worrying for changjo like crazy, now comes ~~~!! >.< Dongsaengie, all the cliffhangers are making the world end. >.<
Ahh why didn't I thought of ~~~ being the one that would be shot?? The possibilities were sooo high! Gahhhh!! I so hope that ~~~ won't die on changjo like that (which I guess she won't), but if she does, I'LL FLIP ALL MY TABLES AND BREAK ALL THE GLASS IN THE WORLD!! No way ~~~ is gonna die!! A bullet in her chest is just..ahhhh I feel the pain too!! D:
I'll pull out every single strand of minhee and Hyungsu's hair I swear!! Then I'll insert a few more bullets into their brains!!

Thank you so much dongsaengie, for making Mr lee appear on time. He saved me from going insane too. Haha! Ahh I get really really excited and anxious and nervous whenever I read your updates and also feel like killing everyone who harmed any of the protagonist haha. Do you want to hire me in your story? I'll help to settle those thugs too hehe. Kidding :P

Eiish I don't like that *Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep* at the end!! Continue!! Don't leave me hanging :( Nobody is gonna die right? Everybody will be alright right? Please give me a resounding yes. Hahaha.

Anyway, oh I must comment about Mrs Choi first before I go over the limit. Wow her words seems to have the power to put people at total ease every single time. When she consoled Changjo and told him that ~~~ will be fine, I really had that thought that everyone would be just fine and the operation will be a success. Although sadly, it's just my guess.. Keke. I'm starting to like Mrs Choi more and more! :D

Update soon please!! :) Don't make any more cliffhangers!! Hehe.
panti1996 #7
Chapter 63: NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO OMG PLEASE DONT LET HER DIE MY CHANGJO OPPA IS GONNA BE SO SAD:(
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
YeollieForever
#8
Chapter 62: Please don't let Changjo die or I'll kill you hahaha just kidding~!! But really don't make Changjo die!!
extraordinarygill
#9
Chapter 62: Okay wait before anything, I need to shout. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! My heart was beating sooo hard when I read this chapter!! It was sooo intense!!! I totally could feel myself in the scene.
Okay, now going back, YES DAMN HYUNGSU!! Your head is going to start rolling!!!!! awww ~~~ is too gullible, but she did it for love.. soo moved *burst out in tears*

Changjo is still so calm at the whole chaos, "I feel sorry for those gangsters." is kinda funny hehe. But I know he is actually shaking inside D': Wow as I read to the last few parts, I really felt sooo..ahh don't know how to describe, all I could say is CHANGJO, I SALUTE YOU! I felt sooo sad and touched at the things Changjo said to ~~~, especially the part when he said "Turn away, I don't want you to watch." My heart really scrunched up.. if not for my family at home when I'm reading, my tears would have literally fallen. Awwww Changjo!! Why did you have to be so sacrificial??! Don't you know how hurt and sad ~~~ will be?? Ahh I can't believe those damn gansterS would kill changjo right in fornt of his girlfriend! >.<

Please... please don't tell me the last BANG was the end of Changjo... please.. Ahhh.. Could it be Changjo's mother appear out of nowhere and shot at Hyungsu? So that gunshot was meant for that DARN guy?? Ahhh Please..dongsaeng I'm pleading you, DON'T LET CHANGJO DIE!! Even so, he is already sooo badly injured, what he needs is to be in the hospital for treatment, and not a bullet in his head T.T My tears would really fall if I find out Changjo got shot, I don't care if my family watch or not..GAHHH!!! Okay, I sound a bit out of my mind now..but I just want to see my perfect couple together :( Their times together are too short, I can't bear to see Changjo leave ~~~ like that. >.<

Ahhh anyway, this chapter really is so well written! Really.. Please let that BANG be worth it. xD Okay I'm going to go over the limit soon >.< Anyway, update real soon! I'm so anticipating the next update! :D
extraordinarygill
#10
Chapter 61: Ahhhhh dongsaengie!! Yay!! You updated!! Haha anyway, gosh.. ~~~ should have just spat more on those stupid faces. Grrrr they aren't in their right minds at all. When hyungsu grabbed hold on minhee's hand, I thought, WOAH is he somehow gonna help ~~~? Then when I read on, he is an absolute gangster, Aish.. ~~~ must be really worried and scared now.. Don't worry!! Changjo and a hold bunch of people is coming to save you!! Hang in there!! And to minhee and hyungsu, SCRAM!! Before the rest appears, if not they will be in dead meat soon. >.<

Wahhh I really detest changjo's mother at first, but the more I read about her, the more I'm in favour of her!! :D She is sooo nice! I almost melted at her, "Make sure to bring the girl back. I want to see how much she is worth to have my son go to hell just to keep her by his side".. Awww I don't know why but it's just sooo sweet!! :)

Wahhh kudos to big bang and block B!! Luckily they came on time to help, I don't think teen top and infinite can handle the north and south wing all by themselves. Kyaaaaa everybody in action to save the precious changjo's girl!! :DDD

Wahhh I'm really sooo glad you updated! Thank you so much for updating despite your busy school schedule. Hope you'll update again, of course when you're free! :D