Advice from Omma/ Ottoke

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Dongwoo's POV

 

 

 

"I'm home-"

Abuji stormed over to me and punched me in the face. I fell to the ground with a large cut below my lip as I stared up at him with wide eyes.

"Why the hell did I get a call from Jessica, telling me about how your disobeying her orders? And falling in love with a girl from the Lee agency?" Abuji questioned.

"Huh? Answer me!"

I looked down at the ground as Abuji continued to strike me. I closed my eyes and let a tear slip out as I ignored all the pain and focused only on ~~~.

"Y-Yeobo! Get off him!"

Omma pulled Abuji off and glared at him. She gasped and shook her head at all the bruises on my face.

"YAH! Why did you do this to him?!"

"Because he didn't listen to Jessica!"

"So? He's a young adult whose in love."

"With the wrong girl! Move away so I can continue my lesson for him."

Omma slapped Abuji's hand as he reached for me. He frowned and continued to do so until Omma held me closer to her. Without a choice Abuji gave up and retreated into his lounge room. Omma sighed and helped me walk upstairs into my room. She opened the door as I collapsed onto my bed.

"Try to get some sleep.. I'll come back later to clean you up."

I nodded and to my side. Omma rubbed my back before shuffling towards the door.

"Do you think I'm a bad person?"

She froze in the doorway. I heard her footsteps walk back and sat up so she could sit down. Omma frowned and fixed the messy parts of my hair.

"Of course not. Why would you think of such a thing?"

"Because.. I'm always getting blamed for things that I don't do. Like what happened with Mrs. Choi and falling in love with the enemy."

I sighed and laid my head on her lap. Omma smiled and my head like she would when I was little. She always knew this was the one thing that would comfort me and make me feel safe.

"Dongwoo you are not a bad person. You may break rules and not follow directions once in a while but that doesn't necessarily make you a bad person. It just makes you a normal young adult. I know you wouldn't believe this but your father acted the same way when

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Cutie_Panda #1
I havent finished it but its sooooo good so far !!! ~Fighting~
-2Mirae- 14 streak #2
Chapter 65: When ~~~~~ woke up the first thing that came intO my mind was awkward~ somehow it sounded awkward for me because ~~~~ is at the hospital and changjo's mom is taking care of her.... I wonder what she ask ~~~~...
Anyways.............. Update soon~~~ ^^ ♥♡
extraordinarygill #3
Chapter 64: Ahhh so sorry dongsaengie for the late comment..haven't been logging in >.<
Anyway, hahaha this chapter was kinda funny. Their conversations are always filled with so much fun and laughter :D Aigooo L.Joe and his Casanova mind keke. Ricky and his food..keke ^^ They're so adorable.
Ahhhh I was actually hoping Changjo wouldn't go for the party so that he could be the first person ~~~ would see when she wakes up. Aww.. But nonetheless, Changjo needs to relieve some stress from all the worrying-for-his-girl syndrome. Kyaaaa >.<
Omg I actually really thought ~~~'s condition deteoriated!! But SHE WOKE UP!!! Yipeeee!!! :D finally! Everybody was so worried sick for her... >.<
Ahh I really really LOVE mrs Choi.. She is such a sweet and motherly lady. Looks like I was really wrong about her at the start..
Hmm... Wae is the story marked completed?? Please don't tell me it ended already dongsaeng ah... :( I still wanna see more of the couple's moment.. Please...i want more!! So update soon!! Hahaha I can't bear to see this story completed.. ^^
KellyKiller #4
Chapter 64: omg for moment I thought that she'd dies and then yeah......GREAT STORY :)
BenaiferCHOI #5
Chapter 63: Please dont kill her or Chanjo oppa will come and hurt you ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
please update soon ^^
extraordinarygill #6
Chapter 63: Ahhh my goodness!! After worrying for changjo like crazy, now comes ~~~!! >.< Dongsaengie, all the cliffhangers are making the world end. >.<
Ahh why didn't I thought of ~~~ being the one that would be shot?? The possibilities were sooo high! Gahhhh!! I so hope that ~~~ won't die on changjo like that (which I guess she won't), but if she does, I'LL FLIP ALL MY TABLES AND BREAK ALL THE GLASS IN THE WORLD!! No way ~~~ is gonna die!! A bullet in her chest is just..ahhhh I feel the pain too!! D:
I'll pull out every single strand of minhee and Hyungsu's hair I swear!! Then I'll insert a few more bullets into their brains!!

Thank you so much dongsaengie, for making Mr lee appear on time. He saved me from going insane too. Haha! Ahh I get really really excited and anxious and nervous whenever I read your updates and also feel like killing everyone who harmed any of the protagonist haha. Do you want to hire me in your story? I'll help to settle those thugs too hehe. Kidding :P

Eiish I don't like that *Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeep* at the end!! Continue!! Don't leave me hanging :( Nobody is gonna die right? Everybody will be alright right? Please give me a resounding yes. Hahaha.

Anyway, oh I must comment about Mrs Choi first before I go over the limit. Wow her words seems to have the power to put people at total ease every single time. When she consoled Changjo and told him that ~~~ will be fine, I really had that thought that everyone would be just fine and the operation will be a success. Although sadly, it's just my guess.. Keke. I'm starting to like Mrs Choi more and more! :D

Update soon please!! :) Don't make any more cliffhangers!! Hehe.
panti1996 #7
Chapter 63: NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO OMG PLEASE DONT LET HER DIE MY CHANGJO OPPA IS GONNA BE SO SAD:(
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
YeollieForever #8
Chapter 62: Please don't let Changjo die or I'll kill you hahaha just kidding~!! But really don't make Changjo die!!
extraordinarygill #9
Chapter 62: Okay wait before anything, I need to shout. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! My heart was beating sooo hard when I read this chapter!! It was sooo intense!!! I totally could feel myself in the scene.
Okay, now going back, YES DAMN HYUNGSU!! Your head is going to start rolling!!!!! awww ~~~ is too gullible, but she did it for love.. soo moved *burst out in tears*

Changjo is still so calm at the whole chaos, "I feel sorry for those gangsters." is kinda funny hehe. But I know he is actually shaking inside D': Wow as I read to the last few parts, I really felt sooo..ahh don't know how to describe, all I could say is CHANGJO, I SALUTE YOU! I felt sooo sad and touched at the things Changjo said to ~~~, especially the part when he said "Turn away, I don't want you to watch." My heart really scrunched up.. if not for my family at home when I'm reading, my tears would have literally fallen. Awwww Changjo!! Why did you have to be so sacrificial??! Don't you know how hurt and sad ~~~ will be?? Ahh I can't believe those damn gansterS would kill changjo right in fornt of his girlfriend! >.<

Please... please don't tell me the last BANG was the end of Changjo... please.. Ahhh.. Could it be Changjo's mother appear out of nowhere and shot at Hyungsu? So that gunshot was meant for that DARN guy?? Ahhh Please..dongsaeng I'm pleading you, DON'T LET CHANGJO DIE!! Even so, he is already sooo badly injured, what he needs is to be in the hospital for treatment, and not a bullet in his head T.T My tears would really fall if I find out Changjo got shot, I don't care if my family watch or not..GAHHH!!! Okay, I sound a bit out of my mind now..but I just want to see my perfect couple together :( Their times together are too short, I can't bear to see Changjo leave ~~~ like that. >.<

Ahhh anyway, this chapter really is so well written! Really.. Please let that BANG be worth it. xD Okay I'm going to go over the limit soon >.< Anyway, update real soon! I'm so anticipating the next update! :D
extraordinarygill #10
Chapter 61: Ahhhhh dongsaengie!! Yay!! You updated!! Haha anyway, gosh.. ~~~ should have just spat more on those stupid faces. Grrrr they aren't in their right minds at all. When hyungsu grabbed hold on minhee's hand, I thought, WOAH is he somehow gonna help ~~~? Then when I read on, he is an absolute gangster, Aish.. ~~~ must be really worried and scared now.. Don't worry!! Changjo and a hold bunch of people is coming to save you!! Hang in there!! And to minhee and hyungsu, SCRAM!! Before the rest appears, if not they will be in dead meat soon. >.<

Wahhh I really detest changjo's mother at first, but the more I read about her, the more I'm in favour of her!! :D She is sooo nice! I almost melted at her, "Make sure to bring the girl back. I want to see how much she is worth to have my son go to hell just to keep her by his side".. Awww I don't know why but it's just sooo sweet!! :)

Wahhh kudos to big bang and block B!! Luckily they came on time to help, I don't think teen top and infinite can handle the north and south wing all by themselves. Kyaaaaa everybody in action to save the precious changjo's girl!! :DDD

Wahhh I'm really sooo glad you updated! Thank you so much for updating despite your busy school schedule. Hope you'll update again, of course when you're free! :D
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