Fix Me

Description

Is this right? Is this love, right? Are you an angel that has come to save me?

Foreword

YO YO YO :D

Yes, this is ANOTHER oneshot.

I think I'm getting addicted at writing oneshots -.-

Anyways, I know I at descriptions, so.. Just read it :D

LOL yeah. And leave a comment! <3

P/S. This will be told from Jonghyun's P.O.V :D

P/P/S. THIS STORY WILL CONTAIN VIOLENCE AND ABUSE. LEAVE IF YOU CANNOT HANDLE.

 

Update - Just corrected some grammar mistakes (:

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shining_writer #1
Chapter 1: This was a good fic, but I feel that Jonghyun's love for Key came too quickly, Jonghyun did not even know Key enough...
YuuChanJR
#2
Wow, this really was like magic. I read your story aloud and I was amazed. Jonghyun seemed so desperate and weak but at the same time he was strong. Strong enough to endure the pain that he had just to stay with Minho. Strong enough to take the chance to change his life. Strong enough to trust another person. Strong enough to try to fall in love with someone else. [or you could say at some points: No No No. It was because he's weak but I think he was really strong here.]
vainilla
#3
waaa stupid minho T^T, how you dare?!!!, poor puppy, but he is fine now T^T

beautiful [forever amazed with your stories XD]
baekskimchi
#4
At first I was like .. KGMPTGNHXPPMGWJDBTGMPT JongHo my OTP !<br />
n then I was like . . no HoHo u're a baddie . .<br />
n then I was like YEAY Key to da rescue ._____.<br />
n then . .<br />
-complete silence- ;______________;<br />
BEAUTIFUL ~<br />
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Congrats !! ;AAA;<br />
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*sorry for d caps if its annoying u T.T<br />
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luckydolphin
#5
Wow!!!! This was really good!!!! I enjoyed reading this!!!!<br />
<3
natalia452
#6
This was real nice, im glad i got to read it... it completely made my day ^^ wont you make a sequel?<br />
thanks for writing and sharing <3
SherlocKey #7
thank you all <3
soohyuns
#8
Omigosh, so heartbreaking D: *sobs uncontrollably* ;_;<br />
It was so sad but so perfect in the end so I can't decide whether I want to be happy or sad!<br />
Amazing one-shot, thank you for posting ^_^
Panda-Monium
#9
Wow, to say this story is awesome, fantastic, perfect, magnificent, even EPIC, wouldn't be enough!<br />
It's so well written it makes me wanna cry!!<br />
Congratulations on such an awesome oneshot!! *o*<br />
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CandI's Inesu :)
alaskagirl #10
Oh honey!! This just breaks my heart!! Please know I love you so berry much!! Your an awesome kid you know that? ^^