The Cigarette

Description

Jiyong left before the last ember of his cigarette faded into nothing

Foreword

This is my first fanfiction ever. So I'm really sorry if it's short and if there are mistakes and it's not that interesting. Please don't be too harsh. Sorry if it's angsty. Comments would be appreciated. :)

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LoneShiba #1
Chapter 1: ;A;

Please glue my heart back together because this story had broke it into pieces.. ;A;

This is so....deep. heartbreaking, sad... omg. I shouldnt cry. No, not crying. Not gonna. T.T
Thanks a lot for writing (and for breaking my heart) ~
I really do love the last line♡
SeungRiRi #2
Chapter 1: Heol!!! This is great!! Can't believe this is your first fic
poppyelisee #3
Chapter 1: tHIS IS SOME MATAPHOR AND I WAS NOT READY FOR THIS OMG THIS ED ME Up AND ITS ONLY 5 PARAGRAPHS OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOUR WRITING IS INCREDIBLE
sadiraelau #4
Chapter 1: Omg this is good!! All the feelings are well written there!! Your writings are so good OMG!!!
UglyKeeper #5
Chapter 1: Woah, good one!!!!!!!!!
Strawberry_Sunrise #6
Chapter 1: SEQUUUUEEEEEELLLLLLL!!!

Daebak authornim! (☆_☆) And you say this is your first fanfic? So saaaaaaad I love it! （＾Ｏ＾）U have my upvoooote! ♥️
goldxntrbl #7
Chapter 1: It's short but it made my heart hurt ;----;

YOU'RE WRITING SKILLS ARE TO DIE FOR BTW!!!
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