His Reality

Description

A peek into Seungri's mind when the world becomes too much.

 

Foreword

I know this was supposed to be a one-shot but I got inspired to do another chapter and this one was a longer one. I'm sorry if the description . I really just don't know how to describe it seeing as they're just one-shots, so i might be revealing everything if I say too much, and the theme is basically Seungri being overwhelmed with the world. Both fics were written when I myself was having problems with my own life, and writing down my pain and translating it into Ri's pain is actually kind of a therapy for me. But I hope people will still like it even if it's a bit.. uhm.. depressing. As usual comments are most welcome, even criticisms. I want to become a better writer so I can share to everyone the half-baked stories in my head. Hope someone will still like this. :)

His Reality is still unchanged. I've added another chapter though and this one was really long. I didn't know how much I was going to write until I finished it. So sorry if it's rough and it's raw. I usually write when I'm feeling those emotions so they tend to be that way. ^^

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chanriskrisyeol #1
Chapter 2: Good job XD
Short, simple yet wonderful
casslah #2
Chapter 2: im going to look up fir ur other fanfics..

(get the message?) /winks

and could not say this in any other way, but..

THANK YOU FOR THIS AWESOME FIC, AUTHORNIM :')
HopelessMidori #3
Chapter 1: First of all, thank you for writing this. I love your writing style, and the way you depicted Seungri's feelings was heartbreaking yet beautiful. Sometimes, I wonder if behind that goofy personality, he hides a pain that only himself knows of. We never really and won't really know what's going on inside of his head, and this portrayal of his emotions could be true. Maybe he really was and is heartbroken of the fact that he's always left behind and constantly chasing for the others shadows. We never really know. Reading this, it's was so so so heartbreaking. Just imagining how he felt during their trainee days-----getting rejected all the time---I feel like crying. I myself had experienced something like this, and it hurts so much. I just hope this wasn't really the case for him though. I hope he doesn't feel so small compared to others like what he seems to be showing right now. I hope that he's not hiding something behind that confidence of his. But as I've read somewhere, a display of overconfidence is a sign of lack of confidence.....

Again, thank you for writing this.
bella0203 #4
Chapter 1: I like this
this is great but so short hehe
I want to read more
griworldlove #5
Chapter 1: Nice. I hope you add more chapters
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