10 minutes

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Have you ever wondered what you would be doing within that crucial 10 minutes before finally knowing that you would lose your special someone...?? Hey this is my first fic!! please be nice and comment:) sorry if there are any errors in my english:/

Foreword

He didnt know what to do..

Should he smile?or should he just let his tears fall?

 

Please do read and comment. This is my first fic.EVER!

so i would really like it if you guys would tell me how you think of my fic so that i can improve for my next fics..:)

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lighteu1610 #1
Chapter 1: it just short & simple but it's really deep. I'm touched and almost crying. :')
i just hope it could be longer a bit.
hope you will write more about JUNSEOB ;)
thanks for sharing ^^
iHartCupcakes #2
Chapter 1: It's really short but you wrote it well! It's so sad to know that you are going to die within 10 minutes, but it's even worse to know that you are going to be separated from your loved one within those 10 minutes... ):
Well written, good job ^^
LuElla-Chi #3
Chapter 1: T^T oh god really good author :)
Xx-ForeverAlone-xX #4
Chapter 1: Waah~

its really good...

Nice work author!^^
blinkinghee #5
Chapter 1: pretty short
a drabble, really, but it was pretty good.. i loved it! every single word and i wish it was longer..
OnASnowyDay #6
so daebak!
ILOVEYS99 #7
is it Yoseob who's gone? but anyway..it was so touching..
JunSeob is broken!! NO!!!
kikichai #8
omg so sweet ^^
Eminem #9
it was so short!!! yet it manage to touch my heart! it's prefect.
SHINeeShikah #10
Thanks for reading<3333
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