Chapter 27: I've noticed there is a difference between Luhan in the two added chapters versus the Luhan in the original chapters. I actually like the Luhan in the added chapters because he seems more confident, full of himself and fits the role of a playboy kingka more. The original Luhan seems a bit too sweet to fit that role. I couldn't see that Luhan loving a girl his name, but I could definitely see Luhan from chapters 2 and 3 doing that. If you end up finishing editing this story, I would really love to see a more aggressive (not in a bad way) Luhan take role to fit his supposed character image introduction here.
Chapter 3: Rereading this again and I really love the addition of the new chapters! It definitely heightens the chemistry between the two. I like Luhan's "persistence" lol
Chapter 3: I need to reread this story again because I do NOT remember Luhan being this playboy-ish! XD
Wow... how embarrassing... and he didn't even mean to lift her skirt. ;LKJDS;AL JAWOI;EJlk;saj;dflkj a;fja ;A; Just-- omg I don't even know what to think lol.
Chapter 40: I understand how you feel. I too get peeved. Like, peoples should get their names right. I really hated it when people spelt Kris' name as Wu Fan.
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