Chapter 4: Reading this again lol. Luhan's "I meant what I said" could totally come in handy for later chapters! It shows that he does actually want her~
Chapter 4: This new updates are really great author-nim! Love this Luhan, he cocky! Love it! Keep it up! The plot is the same but few things were changed, right? Love you and will always support you! <3
Chapter 48: Spechles.. Just one words.. D.a.e.b.a.k!! I really really really faling in love with this story.. Good job authornim... Thank you so so muchhh.. You make my life more colourful. Haha
Author nim, this story is daebak. I was almost finish reading, but you hide the chapter due to ur editing process. Finish it soon and good luck on other stories. Fighting!!!
Chapter 48: oie!!!!!! I'm bursting out here!!! seriously...the story comprises 32 chaps (i realized it just now when i was scrolling up and down repeatedly trough the foreword) and i'm here dying to read the remaining 32-5 updates.... i'm dying out here, you know (well , not literally) ..you guys are so evil :p making us anxious like this XD XD XD....jus kidding!!! dont mind me...continue with your story and best of luck on the remaining editing parts as well as the "adding things" you talked about in the foreword or summary ...? and hope you are not angry with me (hehehehe)...
i havent yet read the story since i want to store the fun until you're done with atleast 10 chaps... but i can guarantee you my full support and fun on my part .........
Chapter 4: Ahhh yes!! This is more like it. I definitely like this Luhan better. Just a thought--when he starts to fall for Sunmi, have hum deny it a little more than before. I think that would really match this personality of his better. His mind will deny it, but his body will still do it (like embrace her while they're sleeping) regardless and it'll be fun~ I do like that you described his thoughts and feelings in the original chapters though. Not enough authors do that. They focus on the girl, and it's actually pretty obvious what we as girls think and feel. I think it's really important (and more exciting) to know what's going on in the guy's mind too! After all, doesn't every girl wonder that in a relationship?
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