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tomotomo_
#1

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Pandafee
#2
Chapter 43: Luhan is so frustrating... I might k word him if he's still be the pain of ...
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Chapter 51: Reread this I forgot how many times already ?
I liked how you explained luhan's name because seeing some stories with 'luhan xi' irks me hehe
clumsyninja04
#4
Chapter 30: this was too cute
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #5
Chapter 51: I decided to finish reading this today since I got a couple of chapters left. I like how Luhan and Sunmi didn't get a divorce and that Minhee is now out of their life. It did kind of annoy me a bit when Sunmi can't read the signs that Luhan loves her and how Luhan hide his real feelings for her because he believes she loves Sehun when he never ask Sunmi how she feels about him.
When I read, I might be able to finish the story in one day but it depends on how energized I am. If I'm really tired or feeling a bit moody, it might take me a few days to finish it.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #6
Chapter 31: I can't help but wonder if Sehun is planning to come in between Sunmi and Luhan by having Minhee appear. Or it is a coincidence that she appeared.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #7
Chapter 24: I wonder what Luhan will do since Sehun ask Sunmi out.
Her sister is adorable especially with the request that they give her some nieces and nephews for her birthday.
FayeYi #8
Chapter 42: I’m KINDA pissed at Sunmi. I mean, she’s angry and disappointed at Luhan & all just cause he said those words, but she’s been the kind of ‘bad guy’ right now, cause she is literally rubbing her relationship in his face every time & he doesn’t complain, it’s just a defence mechanism up. It’s ridiculous how she makes herself a victim here and crying all over. I mean, I get that she’s hurt, she’s in love with him but denies it, but at least Luhan was brave enough to try and make her happy since she was not honest with her feelings as well, making it seem like she loves Sehun. I like the storyline, but it’s just a headache that Sunmi makes Luhan look as if he’s a scum of the earth.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #9
Chapter 15: I feel Luhan is the one kind of breaking the rules he set up with Sunmi. Didn't she point out that she should get the right to date someone without him feeling jealous? Even though both of them are acting, it seems like they are both starting to like each other.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #10
Chapter 10: I can't help but wonder if Luhan is starting to fall in love with Sunmi since he didn't like how a boy tried to ask her out.
Sehun is like a knight in shining armor, coming to rescue Sunmi from trouble.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #11
Chapter 1: Reading the first chapter, I couldn't but be reminded of "Boys Over Flowers".
Eriyaa
#12
Chapter 51: You know what, I think this story is awesome. Despite having a cliche plot, I love how you manage to make it different from the others. I mean, I'm also a picky reader. I wont read if the story is way too cliche and bad written. But what I love about this story, and what make it different from the others is how you change the younger Luhan to a matured one, the loyal Sehun, Luhan's parents are so cool I love them haha, and most importantly, your writing skill. I wont manage to finished this if it was bad written. Plus, the way you emphasized young love also a pure love and can be successful is awe-inspiring. The support from family and friends is important and thats what Luhan and Sunmi have to keep their relationship stronger (of course besides their love). Well, enough with the ranting. I'm moving on to the sequel (;

:: about the 'Xi' thing, I got you, and I feel bad for Luhan oppa. ><
stephanie1138 #13
Sorry to say, but your storyline is cliché. I've read countless of story with a similar plot. I also notice that your storyline is not smooth. What I mean is many event occuring in the story are too sudden and sometimes I think certain element or details are not necessary at all. But, its nice to know you work so hard in writing this story. Keep it up. I know you could improve your writing!
dannyal #14
Chapter 29: Okay. My heart just flatters when Luhan and Sunmi started to act like real partner. Oh my Godddd
katmod16 #15
Nice story
fgtalks #16
Chapter 38: I wonder why this chapt rated M...
Angelz0715 #17
Chapter 51: They are super adorable xD
pinkcat #18
Chapter 1: Love the BoF reference! Haha!