I love all the emotions this fanfic brought out in me. I can relate to TOP's sleeping problems and I love how you can see their relationship slowly developing, as opposed to them just falling in love immediately. Absolutely brilliant!
Chapter 17: I was so... ANGRYYYY with Seunghyun for hurting my baby this way :'( I found him to be so cowardly and selfish, especially with how he treated Yongbae.. That's just some super amazing characterization right there! Really! I rarely feel so passionately for first-person fics that aren't GD-centric (I'm ridiculously biased I know ><;;) but your portrayal of Seunghyun is so interesting and 3-Dimensional! And it all seems rather believable given how he seemed abit cold and unresponsive towards GD during the ALIVE promotions. I did feel a tiny teeeeny weeeny bit outraged at how Seunghyun managed to resolve everything so neatly though (and not giving enough justice to the heartbreak he did to GD </3). But overall I really love this story :) thanks for writing this!
First, thanks for sharing. I like the portrayal of Jiyong and TOP which still in character in my opinion and you clearly show the 'progress' and 'development' of their relationship. I'm tired reading fics where they don't have feeling with each other but then suddenly fall in love with each other. Good ending too LOL.
Now, for the constructive critism since I think u are a talented author..I know u have warned that the development will take a long time and u give good reason. BUT, the story is too slow paced. I fully agree that we need to see the progress (which is your good point) but I feel there are some unnecessary details that only make the chapter looked so long. In the end, I skipped many scenes in some chapters and I still get the flow of the story. I hope in the future, when u make another story with long progress, u may include only things that we have to read to understand the story, since the chapters would be long already.
Okay, that's it, again, thanks for sharing and wish to see u again in the future <3
Just sat down and read all of this and it is ____ing amazing!
The plot, the fights, the emotions, the description. All of it. Perfect!
I feel I can relate to TOPs sleeping habits and all that for some reason..:3
Anyhow, I absoloutley adored this fic:')
I'll be looking forward to mor of your GTOP goodness-if you choose to be awesome and write more!
Oh god my feel!>__< xoxoxoxox
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*tears of sadness because it's completely over mixed with tears of happiness because the ending was just so awesome and adorable and sweet and gehhh*
Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm smiling like an idiot right now. >.<
That was just so GOOD~~! And amazing and fantastic and wonderful and all those other good adjectives that I can't seem to think of right now.
And my laptop survived! I never threw it at the wall. ^-^
I'm so glad I found this story, and it has made me so happy~! And also quite frustrated at times, but...that isn't the point. XP
You know a story is awesome when it can evoke emotions like that.
And I'm pretty sure you've been able to understand how much I love it, since my comments are always freaking ridiculously long.
Anyways, congrats on finally finishing it~!
I know how hard it was on you to finally wrap it all up~~
But don't worry, it was a WONDERFUL ending~! ^-^
<3 <3 <3 <3
Please please pleaseeee write more GTOP fics in the future~!
(A sequel to this would be awesome *cough cough*) ^-^ <3
But either way ^-^
I shall faithfully read whatever you write. *nod*
.... I think I'll go re-read this.
^-^ *hugs*
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
CHEERRSSS!!!!!!! I'm so content with the ending! Perfect simply perfect! A bit sad that this end but a sequel will be appreciated! I want to know how Dae and Ri found out about them! maybe also YG appa? or 2ne1? Se7en? fans? But I'm sure it will be a paradise for GTOP fans, ha, ha.
Been reading this for a while but never really got to comment.. thank you thank you for such a wonderful story! such a perfect ending. Just how i imagined it to be (TOP and GD in the same bed, I know right?) Keep on writing! You rock!!
Okay so let me just say that this was super awesome and so real. Like it's beautiful how you just made them seem so... normal and stuff but made what they were going through the focus of everything. BRILLIANT!
Omo, this was sooo good o:
& I didn't know you also wrote Monochromatic O: ( which is one of my fav cafe AU :D )
Thank you for those amazing stories ~
Looking forward to your next project! ~
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