AHHHHH FINALLY~!
Jeez. Who knew Seunghyun could be so slow? *sigh*
But...progress. If only a bit.
Now he needs to DO SOMETHING about it. >.<
Aish.
Anyways, the flashback was SO CUTE >.<
I loved it a lot ^-^ <3 <3
And I like Seungri's attitude, too~~ ^-^
The little bit where he slid across the kitchen floor was adorable ^-^
Don't worry, the Gods of Writing blessed you again. *nod*
P.S. Laptop is still in danger of breaking.
>.<
"Like I’m the hyung, like you’re the ing maknae" - I LOLed so much at this bit XD
Gotta love Seungri...<3
But yeah...onto the more important matters, WOW!! About time TOP realised that his insomnia and Jiyong's presence hwere connected (and people say that he's the smart one!) I seriously hope that he'll do something about it ^^
but yeah...Youngbae and Seungri should have an 'evil' plan to get Jiyong and TOP locked in the same room together until they figure things out...my contribution to the story XD
Update soon ^^
A step up for Seung hyun, maybe he will give a chance for Jiyong? A trial dating? or dying to get back his friendship with Jiyong? Or unknown cause from outside (but please don't make a car accident or one of them dying, it will be like forcing Seung hyun to accept his feeling).
I smile fondly at the flashback moment of GTOP. It's a nice addition in the fic.
I wonder how you will progress with this, so many exciting possibility!
To talk like Jiyong for a second...
Your stupid story brought stupid tears to my eyes >.<
And I have to say I loved every second of it. *nod*
And I also want to let you know that this story might quite literally kill me.
There were so many times (especially during that fight scene) where I was holding my breath and I didn't even realize it... O.o
And then I had to stop. And yell at my computer screen. And then rub my eyes in frustration before continuing.
I agree with everyone else: keep this story dragging on for as long as you like. Seriously.
But if you keep torturing them like this for too much longer, I might track you down and make you buy me a new laptop because mine will be smashed and scattered around my room in a thousand pieces after I throw it at the wall in utter frustration. >.<
It's hard to see Ji hurting so much TT_TT
I just want to jump into the story, scream at Seunghyun to GET A FREAKING GRIP and give Jiyong a huge hug and tell him everything is going to be okay. >.<
They need to sit down. And talk. And work things out.
Before my laptop breaks. Or I die. Whichever happens first. XP
If you can't tell, I'm kind of ridiculously obsessed with this story... it's probably unhealthy *shrug*
Good thing you like long comments. ^-^
Aish all the emotions were just portrayed so WELL >.<
Every time I read this I can feel what they're feeling...
You have seriously been blessed by the Gods of Writing.
Please please please~~~ update soon >.<
*waits impatiently*
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
It's nice to see how Jiyong's view in this chapter and also Daesung with his own way to cheer the team.
Thanks for the early update, it really made up my day!
Just drag on as long as you like, I like this pace anyway.
Torture both of them first, their fluff or lovey-dovey moments will be much more enjoyable later.
I agree with keo-pi, this is a torture. To see them acting this way, without words. They should talk. Seunghyun is being a coward. Jiyong is his friend, he should at least to talk to him. I'm feeling bad for Jiyong.
Great chapter, thank you so much!
Ugh this is the best kind of torture. I'm just. Your pacing is just perfect. It's killing me that they both feel so guilty about their behavior towards each other. And they both want to make it right but it's HARD because what's going on between them is so complicated and there's no one they can confide in. And I think they need that. JY obviously hasn't gone to YB, and SH won't speak to anyone about it either. So they're stuck being guilty and anxious on their own and it's just NOT helping their situation. (But it's also not making it potentially worse. DILEMMA.) POOR BABIES.
And okay this: he could leave them in his room, and see what was so wrong with his figurines[...]No. It would look like Jiyong was ridding himself of what reminded him of SH.
Because the irony is too delicious. JY, the problem with SH's figurines is exactly the same as your problem with his clothes. And yes, you ARE getting rid of the things that remind you of him. Hiding them, at least. You two are so alike.
alsdjf. Loving the smooth switch of POVs going on. Loving ot5 scenes. Loving all the things.
"This is going to drag on forever oh my g o d" G O O D.
(ps. I like this banner better :).)
This story is so blue. I love it. It keeps me hanging onto its every word. I can feel every emotion Ji is feeling. Its all making me so sad. Fantastic work :-)
I love this story so much <3 and personally, I think the purple banner goes with the mood of the story better than the other (though the red one did look pretty cool).
I loved the last 2 chapters. Now I can see how GD's confession affected Seunghyun. I'm glad to see Seunghyun made a (little) step. Even if he doesn't like Jiyong the same way, they're still friend. He should remember that. Thanks for this update. I can't wait for more.
GODDAMN IT SEUNGHYUN!!!! Just leaving him there...all alone, breaks my heart :'(
yeah, I get that you have personal issues that you have to deal with...and this whole thing with Jiyong just makes things a little more complicated, but seriously!! He's your best friend, don't just cut him off!!! XD This no doubt affects him too...I mean confessing to someone you love is really hard, esp. if you don't know how they feel...and the fact that you just bolted doesn't really boost Ji's self-esteem.
Just talk to him....you don't have to even talk about 'this' just let him back into your life...Please <3
I agree with keo-pi, we need some more of Jiyong's POV.
Update soon ^^
De-lurking to cry you a river. I love this story SO MUCH ;~;. Somehow, when I was reading this chapter, I kept seeing the ending of 'Baby Goodnight' MV in my head, when they're both sitting in the living room, not saying anything or looking at each other. Similar to here, except of course in your story the silence is tense and nerve-wrecking and U G H. I actually sympathize with SH. Throughout the story he's been mentally/chemically unbalanced. He's suppressing something with all his might and it's torturing him psychologically. Then JY's confession out of nowhere...I'd say he's handling as well as he can under those circumstances. I thought this chapter contained very realistic development. I think this couch scene is my favorite in the entire story so far :). The way you marked the passing of time by what was going on in the TV, the pregnant silence, JY choosing to sit through it (waiting, waiting), SH not knowing whether to leave him there or wake him up. Just, everything <3. Having said all this, I'm DYING to see more from JY's POV, or to hear his side of things at least. (When/how did he fall in love with SH? Why did he confess so suddenly? etc). And for SH to put two and two together and finally face everything he's been burying inside the darkest, most unreachable parts of his brain. And of course for it to be JY who helps him do that. Because it's all connected anyway <3.
Yay, such a quick update!
Oh my, the atmosphere is so tense in this chapter! I could feel how nervous Jiyong is, bravo for your writing skill!
*thumbs up* for the cool poster.
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