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-Tiffanyy- #1
This is… wow. Just wow. Can't believe I just discovered this. OMG. Update soon.
Minspro
#2
Very mysterious, I love the metaphors....I like it ^^
Short and sweet, update soon <333
TheAlmightyStarlight #3
>.<
So so so so GOOD~~~~
Jeez, I love it.
The treadmill metaphor was awesome~~! ^;^
Loved it~ <3
But... it does make me sad to see TOP this way. *sigh*
Your writing is so amazing, I can practically feel his emotions haha >.<
Aish~ your writing is just pure genius. *nod*
I can't wait for the next update~
And for when Ji just FIXES everything TT_TT
Update soon~~! \(^o^)/
<3 <3 <3 <3
xkeeki
#4
oh my god, i love this story so much ♥.
nuff said as for now, i'm in the asfkgfkjasdfksfskfhsfdkjh-condition right now ;~;
I LOVE YOUR WRITING.
jisuschrist
#5
my gosh, so depressed, I can almost feel his headaches. Great metaphor. This was short but man, so much impact! Finally, finally we're finding out what's wrong with Seunghyun.
I hope Jiyong comes to rescue soon~

I don't know if I could form a better compliment, though. This was too good. I like how simple yet as;ldhg;alsdkhg great this is.

I was so excited when i saw this update. Best chapter so far n__n <3 also I want to hug Seunghyun, sobs.
Minspro
#6
Awww...poor TOP - don't hate yourself!!! Life gets exhausting sometimes, for everyone!!!
Update soon ^^
fade131
#7
So I already commented on your tumblr but here, now that I've finished reading you get to know that I read the last line and started crying. (it's a compliment to your writing skills and not a bad thing I promise) I'm loving this even though it HURTS to read because you write it so well.
I just want Ji to fix it all. :(
TheAlmightyStarlight #8
Ahhhh~~~!!! >.<
It's soooo amazing!!!! \(^o^)/ <3 <3
Jeez. I love this story so much >.<
The details are fantastic~~!! (Wow, fantastic baby...)
That song has made it impossible for me to say the word "fantastic"... hopefully I'm not the only one. -_-"
Anyways~ I love the details! Especially the part about the Cheerios under the couch cushions and such ^;^ And all the Cheerio's brothers ke ke ke >.<
Andddd~ I can't forget to mention the TOP scene.
I like it. Very much. Ke ke ke ^;^
And then he slept through the night~! SOOO CUTE >.<
I'm dying here. Really. XD
Keep up the amazinggggg work~~~
Can't wait for the next update~~~~
Sorry my comments are so long. -_-
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Minspro
#9
Like I said before - I love this fix - I like the subtle cute gtop moments!!! Update soon ^^
MrsChoiTOP #10
Can I like omg... This is too beautiful and perfect and omg ;A;
COME HERE SO I CAN KISS YOU AND HUG YOU (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
I can't -too much feelings- I ing LOVE this fanfic omg that Gtop moment, my heart is not able to take this BUT GIVE ME SOME MORE! Good work! I really can't wait until next update <333
Skyrumen818 #11
I loved it!
I personally wouldn't want to straighten out Jiyong's shoe closet either (unless I could keep some of the shoes).
Thanks for the update!
fade131
#12
Oh new chapter, I love you. I love love love the silly TOP-ness and the smiling and Ji makes him feel better and he sleeps and omg.
I'm fine really. Uhm.
Update soon~!!!!! I love this.
arsinen
#13
This story is really good. No joke. I'm loving what you're doing so far. I'm just wondering what's going on in Hyunnie's head. I'm hoping Jiyong can help him figure it out. I can't wait until your next update. 8)
MrsChoiTOP #14
Omg this is sooo damn good!
Can't wait till next update ^^ !
AZURA2401
#15
I love it so far. Can't wait for the next update! <3
fade131
#16
really enjoying your writing but oh, it hurts to see Seunghyun hurting... update soon!
jisuschrist
#17
love the details. not sure if the pace is too slow or I just can't stand seeing Seunghyun suffering for 2 chapters ;~;
I like your Jiyong here, so cheerful, so positive~
KiwiCutie
#18
Awe Hyung.. :( I ebt Jiyong wants to comfort him eh? ;)