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Exofanland #1
Chapter 11: i feel like baek's hiding sth..........
luv_kero
2453 streak #2
Chapter 11: Oh jeez, Chanyeol's condition quickly took a turn for the worse and I was getting really worried about how the venom was affecting him, so it's great that Mark managed to pull through (despite not feeling very confident about his healing skills). ^^ And I can understand Baekhyun refusing Chanyeol. He's still trying to wrap his head around everything that's happened and while he might feel flattered by Chanyeol's confession, it's not the best time and place to accept it right now. And Baekhyun still seems kind of confused about how he feels about Chanyeol anyway.
KtjnRwby
#3
Chapter 11: Chanyeol not accepting Baekhyun's answer is a little rude. Just because he may think differently of Baekhyun's uality but if he says he is straight then Chanyeol should have to accept that.

BUT JONGDAE IS HERE NOW AND ALL IS SAVED! (I am a Chanyeol stan but my love for Jongdae knows no bounds.)
Rb2012 #4
Chapter 11: Heheee loved the chapter
shabashubudeana #5
Chapter 11: Awwwww yeollie cute confession. I have a good feeling that baekhyun is keeping a secret that he doesn’t wanna tell chanyeol. Hehehehe
Alphin410
#6
Chapter 11: So basically Chanyeol just awaken his power? Yeay!
And you couldnt blame Baek, Chen-ah, his Chanyeol is dying ="D
Yaone_L #7
Chapter 11: I wonder if they need to be in near death situation in order to be awakened. =) looking forward to seeing more actions.
BabyEri #8
Chapter 11: Xiuchen are crazy hahahha i look forward to their crazy antics hahhaha
Luc4sLuke #9
Chapter 11: I think Baekhyum has a lot going on for himself in a very short time: the kidnapping; his power that he cannot control yet; finding out that demons, shadow-hunters, vampires, warlocks, etc, really exits; loosing his grandfather; the huge demon trap/fight that hurt Chanteol and almost loosing Chanyeol, etc ...I think it is a lot for him to think about and accept his new life, so he might not want to add more, such as accepting his own uality and respond to Chanyeol's feelings ... he needs some time to make sense of everything. Also he might know something about his own "mission", hence he might want to protect Chanyeol? Anyway, their interaction is cute. Chanyeol is not freaked out about his own power, instead he's more determined to make Baekhyun to say he likes him back consciously, with no help from magic potions :) ... Thank you for updating
kashycat #10
Chapter 11: Like honestly - Mark should get something like an emergency phone he always hears/has to answer, it'd make such things much much easier.

And what a perfect moment for Jongdae and Minseok to appear. But I had been wondering why Mark rang the bell already so yeah it was a good suprise x)

I had been wondering when Jongdae and Minseok would arrive, and I'm pretty sure it's gonna be troublesome with them - and with them I mean with Jongdae. I'm already sure I won't like him because of that scene with Jongin where he was a total , and I wonder how much that dislike will grow xD I'm honestly scared how he'll react if he finds out about Baekhyuns powers - something that's not too unlikely to happen - and I'm even scared to see how he'd react if he'd find out about Chanyeols (and also Baekhyuns cause Bi-ual) ual orientation, because I can imagine him to be one of those rather judgemental shadowhunters. Maybe I'm prejudiced with Jongdae in your stories xD

Okay but Minseok and Jongdae were practically no help at all, except waking up Sehun. That was it. That's what they did. End.

Oh gosh oh gosh I'd be the same as Baekhyun, I don't think you're really able to stay silent in such situations - though it's good that he managed, at the end.

I had been wondering if Chanyeol (and then also others) would get their powers or not; apparently they will. (Does that mean Jongdae too ? Not a fan xD) Do the powers awaken when in a life and death situation, or with much Adrenaline ? I mean that'd explain Chanyeol and Baekhyun, but I have no idea about Junmyeon.

What confused me was Chanyeol saying "First Junmyeon now me" because I had been under the impression that Junmyeon hadn't told anyone. At least it seemed like he definitely hadnt told Sehun and, as he's his parabatai, I had just assumed from that that he also hadn't told Chanyeol. So now I'm wondering if Junmyeon did tell Chanyeol (and if then why no of them told Sehun) or if Chanyeol (and maybe Sehun too) accidentally found ot out and Junmyeon doesn't know yet ?

The way Baekhyun was acting makes me pretty sure he's aware of his own feelings, especially with the sentence about his heart racing and being scared Chanyeol might know. I don't think it's about denying his feelings or uality, but more that he's afraid; not of Chanyeol, but maybe even for Chanyeol ? It obviously has something to do with his mission - something I thought had been subsconcious, but now I'm not too sure anymore. It makes me wonder if Chanyeol and Sehun finding Baekhyun like that was a set up as well. I dont think Baekhyun wants anything bad to happen, but that he's forced to do something.

Cant wait for the next chapter x)
qtqueen19 #11
Chapter 11: I think Baek has a good reason to turn Chanyeol down. I mean Chan almost died. Isn't that usually the moment where " he realizes how much he meant to him" or "he regrets not spending more time with him"? Don't get me wrong. I'm glad it didn't go that way. XD I watch way to many sappy things... So I hope it's not just denying or not being clear about his uality.
Having Xiuchen as parabatai is a dream come true. I can't wait for more of them. They seem pretty cool
Also I wonder how all the other powers will be revealed. And how much Junmyeon is going to freak out when he wakes up xD.
So all in all it was a great chapter! You had me worrying there about Chanyeol. I thought he would fall asleep and not wake up for some chapters... Again I'm glad it didn't happen that way. Mark did a great job ^^
Thank you so much for the update! It was pretty intense
jessie_chan
#12
Chapter 11: Baek XD who are you trying to fool
sara_gg_xol #13
Chapter 11: Thanks for updating. I think I will like jongdae. He was funny, seeing all the trouble and was waiting for a warm welcome. And baekhyun was so worried about Chanyeol's condition was cute and lovely.
And I think he can't believe he finds Chanyeol attractive or he's shy and thinks he has a way out of this world, or he knows something and can't get attached to Chanyeol. Well I want to read more.
Take care <3
NoorKyra
#14
Chapter 11: Baek.... He's in denial...... I think he's lying...
nataehyung
#15
Chapter 11: Despite the fact they were in an emergency situation, I couldn't help but laugh at their quipts.
Vice-President #16
Chapter 10: The action scenes are fantastic, dear. The leader duo, and the mama introduction.. fantastic. ^^
Rb2012 #17
Chapter 10: Oooooh action