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sara_gg_xol #1
Chapter 14: Nice chapter. So baekhyun is really betraying Chanyeol and others. He is an agent who has a mission to destroy shadow hunters and he was acting this whole time?!! Did Chanyeol understand it or is he still not sure about baekhyun and his mission?!! I hope baekhyun would talk to him and reveal his true intentions then Chanyeol could help him. And jongdae seems problematic. He is so power-hungry and his competitive self will make troubles later, make the whole institute separated, not able to trust each other and they need to stay together to be able to defend themselves against the enemies. But now they are so distant. It is so worrying. And honestly you did not write poorly. It is so exciting and interesting. Keep it up. All the best <3
Moonstarrr
#2
Chapter 14: Still reading! And was so happy to see an update. I'm sorry you're feeling bogged down, but please know that nothing you've written is garbage. Not every chapter/story will always be your absolute best work, but don't let it stop you. I enjoy your stories very much and am glad you continue to write for us. Thank you!
green009
#3
Chapter 14: Still reading^.^ you take your time♡♡
vevyeol
#4
The Mortal Instruments is my favorite book series...once I saw Shadowhunter it drew me in so quickly
Exofanland #5
Chapter 13: Baekhyun's such a heart break here.... why......wae.........
ahyeahnotsaltyman
#6
Chapter 13: I really enjoy reading this thank you author uwu
luv_kero
2453 streak #7
Chapter 13: I think my favorite character so far is Jongdae, haha. He's so fun and reckless, and he really livens up the scenes with his weird antics. XD Chanyeol's conversation with Joy brought up so many questions and now my thoughts are in a muddle, because I think there's a link to Baekhyun being a destructive force with how he's treating Chanyeol right now, but I'm not sure how. >___< Chanyeol should probably take it slow for now, since Baekhyun might withdraw even more if he keeps trying to prod.
BabyEri #8
Chapter 13: I forgit to tell you that xiuchen microwaving strawberries is epic! Hahhaha

Also, I'm not done yet but I'm laughing so hard at chanyeol..the whole world is relying on his non existent flirting ability hahahhahahha
sarcasticdevil #9
Chapter 13: I have this suspicion since that drunk baekhyun chapter. Baekhyun obviously likes chanyeol but he said its sad because it's impossible because of his mission. I think there was some mission engrailed in baekhyun since childhood and the time he spent with the demons brought that mission out and realised. So him being in the institution wasn't the part of the plan but he's sticking around to find his grandfather, disappear and destroy the nephilim. He must've been looking for taeyeon just in case she knew about him and his plan.
Vice-President #10
Chapter 13: What he should do? Ditch him. Hahahaha~
NoorKyra
#11
Chapter 13: I think ... The Shadowhunters is quite dangerous and his statement that he's straight... Baekhyun... I don't think so...
He's in denial....he likes Chanyeol..but he don't want to be hurt.
And he have one of the most powerful force in Shadowhunters...

*sigh*
KtjnRwby
#12
Chapter 13: Hmmm I think he is distancing himself since he almost lost Chanyeol because of the greater demon poison. He is still being a brat though.

"Are you telling me the faith of the nephilim rests on me filrting with someone?" made me laugh outloud. Haha
Yaone_L #13
Chapter 13: Truthfully? I was rooting for Jongdae to win the fight considering Chanyeol should be distracted by Baekhyun's presence plus his so called "fate of the world" lying on his shoulder. Or at least Jongdae to taunt Chanyeol more. Anyhow, interesting fact on how Minseok and Jongdae has a sort of arranged marrieage.
Luc4sLuke #14
Chapter 13: Baekhyun is still in denial, he likes (or more then like) Chanyoel but he keeps pushing him away and also he seems determined to leave the institute as soon as possible. It's going to be interesting to see how their relationship develops; thank you for updating.
musicislikemagic #15
Chapter 13: Uuugh this got more confusing for me ;__; I have a lot of theories that change from a chapter to another lool I really can’t wait for more details to be unraveled abt the story.thank u for the update ^^
PsychoWolf
#16
Chapter 13: Ooh maybe Baekhyun didn't really need to be rescued from the hospital. Maybe it was all a ruse to get close to the Shadowhunters. The robots at the hospital could have given him a mission involving the Shadowhunters and in return, they'll let Baekhyun see his grandpa again. And that's why he's pushing Chanyeol away. He likes Chanyeol and wants to be with him but he can't allow himself to get attached. idk....
sara_gg_xol #17
Chapter 13: I knew baekhyun would push Chanyeol away and deny his feelings. And joy speaking with Chanyeol made everything more confusing. So baekhyun is a very powerful and special case and is going to betray shadow hunters because he wants a way to get out of the new world and all the demons?!! He is keeping a secret so who left him in that hospital did give him a mission to get closer to shadow hunters?!!
What Chanyeol gonna do? He apologized but Baekhyun wants to keep a distance from him. Is it because he can't control his wants and attraction towards Chanyeol or he doesn't want to get closer in fear of not being able to destroy them?!!
This story is awesome, so exciting and every chapter is better than the other.
And I wanted to ask about the one you have put in front of the story name. Is there a series of stories, number 2 and...?
Thank you so much for updating. It was great.
Take care <3