Chapter 14: this story is actually so good! i totally love the mortal instruments series and now u incorporate chanbaek in it makes me very ecstatic ^w^ im digging the plot here pls continue writing this cuz all of this is not trash, its gold :D fighting!!!
Chapter 14: I love how you put everything in the detail ❤❤ your story is amazing as always, and Baekhyun as a traitor? I dont think he is a really traitor, remembering that he still care enough for them to run away. And- is that why he is in doubt when Chanyeol confessed to him?? ^^
Chapter 14: Baek somewhat working for the other side reminds me of Monster MV
This update is actually good! Things are building up well.. I'm curious about Junmyeon's trip to Idris i hope he can bring back Nini who wants to go outside too :)
Chapter 14: Ha! I knew something was up with Baekhyun! He's working with the enemy!! But even so. I think he will be the one to save the Shadow Hunters if it ever comes to that.
I loved this chapter btw. I really liked how you wrote all the dynamics between everyone. ♥
Chapter 14: Please don't think about your writing like that TT it's in no way garbage, neither the writing style nor the content! There's a reason so many people read your stories. I understand that your self-critical, but you really dont need to be insecure about your writing!
Chapter 14: What....??!!! Seems like the other Shadowhunters is stalking and watching them from afar...
And those strong demons are summoned by the warlock...???
Baek's grandpa is the traitor and Baekhyun have one of the most powerful element in all chosen nephilims
Chapter 14: SO MANY NEW THINGS TO THINK ABOUT OH GOD
TRAITOR BAEK WHY DO YOU DO THIS
SEHO GOTTA GET THEIR ACT TOGETHER
AND JONGDAE I ADMIRE YOUR MOTIVATION CAN I PLEASE HAVE SOME OF IT THANKYOU
this chapter was EXACTLY the right thing to start the build up of complications hoo hoooooo
Chapter 14: My heart cracked a bit when Sehun talked to Junmyeon :( it was very well written in my opinion. I didn't see it coming, that Baek was a traitor. I'm so curious and excited! I hope Chan can do something to help him. I don't know if Chen is great or annoying but either way I love him xD. I missed the story (even if you update way more frequently than all the other authors I'm subscribed to, but the story is great so I always miss it)
So thank you very much for the update!
Please don't drop this as long as you're also still enjoying it!
Chapter 14: I wonder who is behind everything, who started the whole process of destruction of the Shadowhunters and, is this the only plan? or is it more to it?
Chapter 14: Heyyyy ofc I will stay close to this story! I love it like hell. I find it gr8 to finally know what the is wrong with Baekhyun and I'm really torn. I still like him but I'm so suspicious about him. Gaaah it's really heard to decide. But I'll continue on cheering for Baekyeol. Yay. Yeol will get him on the right side and heal him. I'm pretty sure (no I just want it to be exactly like that haha).
Take care and I'll see u in the next chapter~
❤
Chapter 14: Of course I’m still reading,thanks a lot for updating. I really feel for sehun :/ it’s not that easy considering the relationship parabatais have.
Chapter 14: Ahhh, so that's why Baekhyun has been rejecting Chanyeol and lying to Junmyeon. His actions definitely make more sense now and I should've expected something like this. OTL And it was about time that Sehun and Junmyeon blew up at each other, with all of the deception that's been surrounding their relationship lately. =/ I'm still leaning more on Sehun's side, but I can understand Junmyeon's fears. He didn't want to be rejected by someone who was so important to him, but Junmyeon's actions instead made Sehun feel like HE was the rejected one. :'( It's a messy situation right now, but more communication and understanding on both sides will hopefully help. :)
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