An Extremely Weird Dream of Exo Continuation

My previous blog post: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/210568

Sadly, I didn't dream up a continuation. >__<

But, my dear friend wrote one. So here it is, copy-and-pasted from her comment on my previous blog post, with some edits to fix a few mistakes.

 

Tao confesses to Kris. Kris realizes how Tao is the only one who helps and the only one who cares and the only ally he has left. Then he realizes Tao is more than an ally or friend, and he kisses him, without a word, right then and there as butterflies dance around them. Tao doesn't miss a beat and kisses him back.

Tao thinks to himself that he knows this island isn't bad. He knows the jungle is good, that nature is beautiful, that this place is special. The sunset, the butterflies, and Kris. Everything is perfect.

When they pull away from each other, Kris remembers it's getting late, but he doesn't want to go back to the safe shelters. He already feels safe. He's not afraid anymore. The sunset, the butterflies, and Tao. Everything is perfect.

They kiss again as the sun starts to sink into the sea. Tao mumbles, "I'm sorry," but Kris doesn't know what for.

Kris suggests they go back to the beach, but he knows neither of them want to leave. So they don't. They stay there, as the sun sets and the stars come out. They lie there, on the lush, green grass, and fall asleep in each other's embrace.

And she dare says she can't write a good romantic scene. There were some tense consistency issues... but I don't really care, because it was really, really good to me! Besides, I have problems with tense consistency all the time. XD

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ess_a-tch #1
>.>
SHawesome15
#2
@ess_a-tch, it's really good, it's not y writing at all
ess_a-tch #3
Good. >.>
s-elfish #4
@ess_a-tch okay, i fixed it up. ^__^
ess_a-tch #5
Oh my god. At least fix the grammar for me.
ess_a-tch #6
What do you think you're doing. It's ugly, and there's grammar problems. It's not good. >.<