Hi wondering reader/writer!

I've posted my first story 17 February 2019 and aside from one subscription, I haven't got any feedback yet. Could you please help me with some feedback? In return I can check out your story/graphics and give you my honest opinion about your creation. :)

The story is called "One Minute More" and stars EXO and a few Original Characters in a university setting. You can read more about it down below. Thank you if you help me out!

"Chanyeol and Bina are friends who rely on each other, talk about their deepest thoughts to each other and support each other all the way. They think they're friends. But is "friends" what they really are?

A sudden meeting causes only a ripple in their relationship but this small ripple stirs up waves none of them saw coming.

"Would it be too much to ask for just one minute more?" - Bina
"I'm not sure if one minute more will ever be enough." - Chanyeol"

This is an LGBTQ+ story meaning it feature characters with different ualities. As a supporter of the community, I wouldn't like to see any mean/hate comments regarding to it. If this makes you worried about the rating, I can assure I plan to keep this PG-13. 

Click here to read!