Chapter 1: goosebumps.
Really. I'm glad I came upon kodawari reviews and clicked the link to your story. People need to read this! This deserves more recognition! Goodness. Your writing style is perfection. I can't help but come back again and again because of the hollow feeling in my chest that the only way for it to be full again is to read your story. Sigh, I have no more words left. I feel that this comment of mine did not do enough justice for stating how beautiful your work is. I really hope more people come across your story.

Chapter 1: Okay, I don't really know how to describe this style of writing but it's my favorite style, and one that I try but can never pull off. I really don't know what to say, but it was beautiful. right in the feels.

Chapter 1: Okay. I just really fell in love with this. Your writing style is not mindful of the world, and only the story itself and where it revolves in. I'm going to use the word, 'really' all over again because /really/ you write in a sense where slowly and from the start I can understand and digest in everything that's happening between the characters so truthfully. I really, really, so, so much love this.

Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story! :D

Chapter 1: As stated in the comment below, I'm a bit irritated no one has even said anything about this work. It's beautiful, and gives me shivers to read. Actually, I've read this a total of four times, and my mind is still whirring at the beautiful style of your writing.

Gah, this was beautifully flawless, and lovely to read. I'm sure I'll come back to it. Thank you for writing this <3

alright, i'm pretty pissed to see that no one's left a comment on this beautiful piece of work, so i'm going to go ahead and do it because to hell with professionalism.

you're going to hear this more in your actual review, but i'm pretty sure that i'm actually experiencing a hangover from this fic. i read this at two in the morning, figuring that i would do the note taking for my review before heading off to bed. it's now four in the morning, i've read this a total of three times, and i /still/ can't stop thinking about the perfection that is this story. like, seriously. i have to get up in three hours for my university's freshman convocation. i honestly can't deal right now. head is reeling.

the review is either going to be up later today or tomorrow; depends on how busy i end up being. i'm actually worried that my review of your story won't be able to do it justice, so fingers crossed, haha