Title : My Handsome Fosterling

Author : innocentkimkyungsoo

Story views   :  12395

Story subscribers : 544

Story upvotes  :  72

Story Comments :  323

Story Type :  Story

Story Length :  Chaptered

Characters  :  Sehun and OC

Genre : comedy drama, fluff, romance

Status : On Hiatus

Warnings : None

Story Summary : 

Nineteen-year-old Park Haerin was up for the job of babysitting a twenty-year-old handsome Oh Sehun; which she believes that he is suffering from Autism.

But she doesn't know about the truth that Sehun is actually a normal guy who was just acting like a childish Autism boy to cover up his past.

Author's Message:

I hope you will check out my story ^^ don't forget to subscribe and upvote!

Review:

Title: 9/10

It's safe to say that your title grabs the reader's attention with no difficulty at all. 

Foreword/Description: 7.5/10

Although the description pulls in the reader, I feel as though it's lacking in detail? There was also one or two misused words there.

Your Version: "...which she believes that he is suffering from Autism."

Fixed Version: "...whom she believes is autistic."

It's just a tip which you obviously don't have to use or worry about if you don't want to consider it, haha! :)

Appearance: 9/10

The poster matches perfectly with your story so kudos to whoever designed it! 

Grammar and Punctuality:  13.5/15

There were quite a few grammatical errors here and there throughout the story. I suggest re-reading your chapters to fix those mistakes c:

Plot: 13.5/15

I really enjoyed the storyline. It's a unique plot that I'm sure not many people would be able to come up with.

Originality: 8/10

I can't say I've read a fanfic where an autistic man was actually well and healthy. Great job~

Flow: 9/10

.There was no stopping points or confusing scenes. Good job in having everything run smoothly. 

Character Development: 9/10

Every character seemed to have a role in the story. Being able to write about many characters is actually quite hard to do but you were able to control their roles and parts. A+

Enjoyment: 14/15

I really liked reading this. The confession scene, in my opinion, was adorable ;~;

83.5/100

Reviewed by: The_BlackStar

THIS REVIEW WAS FROM MY OPINION ONLY, PLEASE DO NOT BE OFFENDED OF HOW I GRADED/REVIEWED THIS. WE SHOULD ALL TAKE JUDGMENT (GOOD OR BAD) AND TAKE IT IN A POSITIVE WAY TO HELP US IMPROVE IN LIFE! :)