Seoulmates

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"I'm Taemin." He smiled. A strange feel of deja vu washed over her as she shook his hand. "Nae, I'm Hye-In. Have we met before?" Hye-In stared at him, completely puzzled, where exactly had she seen his face before? "You've probably seen me on TV." He lied hiding his disappointment behind the biggest facade of delight he could muster up. Taemin mumbled under his warm breath, "You said you would remember me."

Foreword

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LYZAAA #1
I like this. Although I didn't get it at first, the end of the chapter summed it up ^^<br />
jiashuai #2
I like the plot. I was a lil bit confused at first and I actually read it twice. LMAO XD. It's good!<br />
Looking forward to updates
hye-in #3
"Letting someone in is pain, it's just how the world works, I remembered my Omma saying so long ago."<br />
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So it's like saying, I remember my Mom saying that, and then at the end it's just Hye-In talking to her Mom, asking her where she is now in her head. Thinking. LOL. But I'm going to elaborate more on it later so don't worry. It will make more sense.
fastpvce #4
"I want to know for myself, Omma, if what you said to me as you left, was really true. Omma, where are you now?" This line ^^
hye-in #5
Wow thank you Mish, ^__^ what didn't you understand so I can elaborate/fix it?
fastpvce #6
I think the story was a hit. Though I didn't understand it at first, as I read further I came to like to story very much. This story sounds like a novel, actually which is something I can't write. Good flow with the story though I couldn't understand the last two lines.
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