Saving Seconds [PLEASE READ THE LATEST CHAPTER]

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"Tradition could either define you or destroy you. But in our case, we are bound to the latter in a literal sense. Yes, tradition kills us – Seconds like me, at least; yet, the adults seem to cover it up with simple reasoning: “Kids, this is all for controlling our population.” Bull.  I know for sure that this sick practice is rooted and done for something shallow. Overpopulation could call for countless solutions but not this. I am Jung Soojung, second female child tied to the Jung household and the sector of Vista, and I have been chosen to participate in this dirty little game. Oh God, help me." - Krystal, Saving Seconds

Foreword


Title: Saving Seconds

Author: _pxtchi

Genre/s: Romance, Mystery, Supernatural, Drama, Survival, Friendship

Character/s: Kim Myungsoo (INFINITE's L), Jung Soojung (f(x)'s Krystal), Hwang Miyoung (SNSD's Tiffany), Kang Seulgi (Red Velvet's Seulgi), Heo Youngji (KARA's Youngji), Im Jinah (After School's Nana)

Date started: June 22, 2015

Date ended: 

Host: asianfanfics


 

 


 

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A series of knocks come flying on our front door, leaving our whole family in deafening silence as we fed on dinner.

“Did anyone of you invite a friend over?” My father looked up from his plate as he turned his gaze to each of us. We all shook our heads ‘no’ as another knock came in.

“Under the order of The Republic’s King, we are requested to deliver The Order to the Jung household of the Vista sector.” I heaved a heavy sigh as I chewed on my lower lip, thinking through my ways on how to escape from this rather cruel fate. I could sprint through the door and hide in the forest, or I could kill myself right this instant.

My elder sister, Jessica, placed her hand over mine and gave me a light squeeze. I didn’t notice that I was terribly shaking. I was not the type to show fear.  I looked at her uneasily, but her gentle pair of eyes was enough to soothe me on the inside. Surely if it were my sister in this situation, she’d know what to do. 

“May we please speak with the Jungs?”

 The authoritative voice of the representative soldiers echoed from outside, leaving my father no choice but to stand and head for the door. This is it, and there’s no turning back; but seeing every member of my family fall into faces etched with despair left me nothing but a crushed heart.

And in that very moment, I loathed myself for being a Second.

The soldiers wrapped in blue and red armor marched toward the dining table as they both offered a bow to my sister and my father. Their smiles were one of the most disgusting things I’ve seen, for they curved all the way up to the middle of their cheeks – teeth shining tremendously but eyes clouded with darkness. The red-suited soldier reached for his leather messenger bag tied around his waist as he pulled out a peach ribbon-rolled, coffee-smelling paper – The Order. He cleared his throat and spoke in staged over-excitement, enough to make every member of our family cringe.

“With respect to the recognition of the Gala of Seconds, we hereby choose the Jung household’s second, Jung Soojung, as a participant and a delegate of the Vista Sector,” Please stop it, any more of this will pour devastating shades of torment to all of us, “as such, the household is requested to prepare their child for the banquet and the public screening scheduled during this month’s Full Moon. Congratulations!” That was it. That was all it would take for me to feel how much of a burden I am to my own family. Why did it have to be me?

Why did I have to be a Second? 


author's note:

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eleutheromaniac #1
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CroixJean
#2
Chapter 8: Not fond of the SehunStal happening, but it is what t is. I wonder if Soo would have anyone else catch his eye for fairness, unless it's that new helper from before. Hopefully Hayoung would be alright. Happy you used that gif!^ INFINITE had a comeback, so I've been continuously blessed by his gorgeous face and it's inspiring to read.

I'm curious if the royal blood had any sort of special powers that makes them different? Considering the others (who can rebel), they must have something powerful within them that would have their family rule over the country. Maybe they have every capability of every section? And/or the power to strip the people of their capabilities? This all came because I wondered if Myungsoo was exceptionally trained in fighting for his own protection since he'll be a prime target for ransom, lol. Not that his father would care now, but he's the only heir after whatever happened to his sister.
ikrystal #3
Chapter 8: Their background is so sad, but I wonder what Hayoung is suffering? I mean her illness.. and what do they mean by ex-Vista?
And btw, is it just me who think Soojung grows a feeling for Sehun? Lol XD
lemontae #4
Chapter 8: i realy like your fanfic hehe
but i think you should write down the pov ;)
ikrystal #5
Chapter 6: What happened with Jessica and her dad? O.o Is it one of the king's plan?
Btw, they meet!! Myungstal <3
CroixJean
#6
Chapter 6: Thinking about it, what is the palace fashion for the royals? I'm assuming it to be a more modern version. INFINITE has a lot of prince-like clothes, especially for their One Great Step concert (you can Google "myungsoo 140228 or 140301"). Heck, even his SBSGayo outfit on the date of 121229 with that dark blue works. But anyway, I tend to love him in those, don't mind me and my fangirl.
CroixJean
#7
Chapter 6: I imagine Myung dressed up in his white outfit and hair from the Last Romeo video. Flawless human being. https://31.media.tumblr.com/d12fb55c4e92325d52ad547633e02eae/tumblr_n5wn0cg3og1ry65bao1_500.gif

They finally meet! I've been waiting for it. It's interesting to see how will they communicate considering how on watch everything will be from now on. As for Jessica, there's something going on with the Jung family here. You probably won't answer my question if both are biological daughters though, lol.
eulnasshi
#8
Chapter 6: They finally meet!! This story is getting more interesting. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
googletranslate #9
seems interesting! i'll read it now!
CroixJean
#10
Chapter 5: So the "her" concerning Myung and his mother is about his sister, because, she's not present anymore. For whatever reason it may be. And the "her"/"she" of Soojung is her mother. I just wonder why Soojung is that special and why she would be the talk of the palace, other than being eyed by the heir of the royal family as a possible partner in crime, you can say. What makes her any different than the rest in ending the King's reign? I can't think of anything other than some prophecy or something, lol. None have seen her strength yet to be viewing her in such a way.

Anyway, I think you know all of us are dying for MyungStal to meet, lol.