Me You Review Shop (feat. San E) [BUSY]

Description

Want a constructive, detailed, and unbiased review? Well you've come to the right place because that's what this shop offers. I'll criticize and compliment your story, and help you improve it. This is a shop for those of you who are looking for honest reviews to help make your story and writing better.

Requesting a review is completely free, and all you need to do is follow these simple rules:

1) Do subscribe! And please do not unsubscribe after your review is completed. Upvotes are completely optional, but would be highly appreciated if the review did help you.

2) Do not rush me. This is a one-man shop, (well I'm not a man XD) but it means that I will do all of the reviews by myself. And I am a very busy person because I obviously have a life outside of AFF. I will try to get all reviews done as quickly as possible, so it would be nice if you don't pressure me to get it done quickly.

3) Comment before and after requesting.

4) Please credit this shop for the review.

5) You must allow text selection until the review is done. (You can turn the option back on after you pick up^^).

6) The password needed for requesting is your OTP. Ex: myungyeol.

Anyways that's it! I promise I don't bite, so don't be afraid to request a review or ask any questions. That's what the comment box is for anyways!

The form for requesting is available here.

Important Note: Also, I will like to mention that I do all genres and pairings except . It's not that I'm not comfortable reading it, but just that I don't know enough about the genre to judge and review it. So rated m stories are currently not being accepted for reviewing. Sorry, and thanks for understanding. :)


 

Foreword

Here is the rubric that will be used for reviewing your story:

 

Title (--/10)

Description/Foreword (--/15)

Presentation/Layout (--/15)

Writing Mechanics/Writing Style (--/30) [Writing Mechanics (--/20), Writing Style (--/10)

Characters (--/35) [Characterization (--/15), Character Development (--/15), Point of View (--/5)]

Plot (--/45) [Originality (--/10), Believability (--/5), Conflict (--/20), Theme/Message (--/5), Predictability (--/5)]

Content (--/25) [Flow (--/10), Pacing (--/10), Sequence of Events (--/5)]

Overall (--/25) [Memorability (--/10), Reaction (--/5), Personal Enjoyment (--/10)]

Total: --/200 points

 


 

REVIEW LIST

Panical_love || Vacation of Lies || Completed

paula1988 || My Stepdad Is A Famous Idol! || Ongoing

Fan_of_Karma || Don't Meddle with Time, Agent Kim! || Waiting

creamcolored- || Seducing MrGay || Waiting

KangminBread || Prophecy of a Star || Waiting

kalon_sama || You Like Him || Waiting

kalong_sama || I Need U || Waiting

myungyeol4evr
calling Panical_love

Comments

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kalon_sama #1
i requested again ahah kill me i am shameless
kalon_sama #2
I requested! AND ALSO OMG I READ THE REVIEW YOU HAD AND WOW A+++ SJF GOWAIJGHA IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL LIKE HERE YOU GO COOKIES FOR FREE <333
KangminBread
#3
made a request thanks.
creamcoloured-
#4
Requested!!
Panical_love
#5
Chapter 1: Omg thank you so much for this long review! I agree that my pacing haha. My mind can never come up with details. I wish I could. Maybe with time, I'll get better. I'll try and improve! But thanks for enjoying my story! Right now, I have writers block. So I'm taking a break. But I will continue!
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 1: Eh, it's not even my review, but I'm gonna comment anyway. THIS IS SO DETAILED. Like really, I did not expect to see this O_O I actually just read through the entire thing, and I really applaud you for your hard work. This now makes me feel embarrassed as a reviewer OTL.
Fan_of_Karma
#7
Requested! :) I'm willing to wait, so take your time :)
paula1988
#8
I requested! :)
Panical_love
#9
I requested! :D