Why I do this

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My first time to post a story /hide in shame/

This is not my first fanfic I ever write. My first fanfic, well, it stuck, I don't know how to continue that. But it's about kyusung too. Mehehe, my beloved otp~

Hope you will read this poor written fic, and give me some suggestions and criticisms or your thoughts about this story. I know the story is boring to read, because i wrote this in my free time. But hope this decent enough for you to read ;)

Enjoy

 

Ps. The title is what in my mind right now

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horani
#1
Chapter 1: Ending is cute :).
The story is short but has a nice feeling to it, I enjoyed it!
I feel the same, every time i write a story I don't want to read it right away and that's why almost all of my fics had or have errors all over them (i fixed some).
Nyomski
#2
Chapter 1: Cute story, but i need more. kekeke.
Cenya14 #3
Chapter 1: Cute story, short and sweet
FantasyWol
#4
Chapter 1: I really like it. Simple, short and nice. My Kyu being evil, and Jongwoon being cheesy. What could I ask for?
Yes, there are some errors but I looked at the content, not much at the grammar. Also because I do errors.
khyo009 #5
why can't I see the story?