Chapter 1: you've managed to capture their dynamic and how it changes over time with each one of the short scenes (and they get a satisfying end after all the tension that's been built up/simmering underneath the surface haha)
thank you for writing this, i really enjoyed reading it :)
Chapter 1: The ending part is sweeter than ice cream! LOL I love this, especially the ending. Thanks for great work... and I guess it was the last part that you experienced >_<
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