Yes, I know it was pretty darn lame. But when you only have 800 words to work with, a LOT of things CAN'T be said.

My teacher said it was good (liar -o-), and said that it was like the ending to a novel, but I managed to make it into a short story itself.

So if anyone likes this heapssss, I might consider writing the beginning of this (like a "sequel"?) as a new story.

Comments are much appreciated, and questions should be directed to my wall (or the comments, idm anymore).

Sorry I sound rushed (even now); it's coz I'm SERIOUSLY behind on English and EVERYTHING atm Dx

- Melody~xoxo