Twisted Fate

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"Hi! I am.. Kim Soyeon. A new girl in this area, Bucheon. I came from Seoul and.. Please take care of me well!"

"Soyeon?"

"Don't you remember me?" she snapped his hand away, "Gosh like seriously– I don't know you!". He stop her track again, "Don't act like you don't know. We have been friends for years.". Okay, you know what?." she put her hands in front of him, "I am new here. Since I was born I lived in Seoul. I don't know you and I, never saw your face. When I moved here, that's when I know you, that's what."

 

A twisted fate for a guy named Byun Baekhyun. 

 

"I am sure that she is her."

Foreword

 

A twoshot!! /clapclapclap

Hahahahaha my school is going to start soon and starting next week I'm going to get reaaaaaaaaaaaallyyyyyy busy with my big exam —PT3. /dead

But I............... Still want to write. So this is a gift(?) for ALL bcs i don't think i will have time to write no more. So i write this twoshot while i have the time and hope you enjoy eue 

This is a brand new idea that just pop out my mind. A really twisted story and i think i should stop talking now cus now my head is twisted /wait what? And ok bye. 

[ALERT!!!]

I didn't write who is who POVs in this fic; if you are uncomfortable with this you can stop reading! ^^ But it is actually easy to know who's POV. In the first chapter, it start with Baek pov, then OC, (all povs change with ' – ' sign), then back to 3rd POV, then back to Baek and so on. Except for the last part, which stay with OC's POV. In the second chapter, it start with Baek, then OC, 3rd POV and then there is no changes in POV (it stays with OC's POV) [EXCEPT AFTER THE HOSPITAL SCENE AKA THE CANDIES SCENE BCS THAT IS IN BAEK'S POV] (but after that it stays with OC). It is not really confusing (esp for the last chap) bcs it change with the same order ^^ Hope this can help!

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Yeonnie
#1
Chapter 2: A sweet story! I like that you made the "regain memory" part just as important as the romance. It gave this twoshot more depth, I think.

But it was a little bit confusing when you switched to flashbacks, since they we're written just like now. You should put the flashbacks in italic and maybe even dark gray color it so that the readers will understand that the current part will be a flashback. Same when you changes the point of view between Soyeon and Baekhyun. Start off the change of point of view with "Baekhyun POV" or "Soyeon POV" in bold.

But ignoring these confusions, I really enjoyed this^^
Shirotakashi
#2
Chapter 2: I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad I found this story!!!! Thanks for your creative mind and writing this!!!!!
sparkle_starxx
#3
Chapter 2: Love it soooooooo mucccchhhhhieeee!!!!
shenolza #4
Chapter 2: WAAAA MYY HEAART *cries*
this was mindblowing authornim!!
baexo00 #5
Chapter 2: So sweet ^^ love this story so much!! Good job author-nim...ur the best :D
Shirotakashi
#6
Chapter 1: Why doesn't she remember Baekhyun!!?
Bbfairline
#7
Chapter 1: Next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!