Popeye's Feedbackzone. (busy) (hiring reviewers)

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Want feedbacks about your story? Come here and fill up a form to request for it! I will gladly read your story and give you my personal feedback. For fun. No, seriously.

 

PLEASE READ

I only have a few rules to say if you want a review

1. Comment after requesting and after receiving the review/feedback.

2. Subscribe and enjoy (say what?). 

3. Upvote is optional, but is loved (they always say that so I might as well) lmao

4. Be patient.

5. Uh no bashing. We're all friends. I love you you love me we're a happy family!

6. If possible, you can put the feedback in your story/foreword. And credit this shop (lewl)

7. I don't need to be a native speaker to give feedbacks on your stories right? Aha

8. P.S. I DO NOT READ OR DO REVIEWS FOR YURI OR GIRL TO GIRL STORIES.(For now) The rest are fine. , OC, Hetero and are more than okay.

 

Form (Just comment it below) 

Story Title: 

Story Link:

Story Description: 

Focus for the feedback: 

Anything else you want to say:

 

 

Rubric (unless you have your own rubric or simply don't need a rate, just say)

Story Title (5/5):

Layout/Graphics (4/4):

Description and Foreword (10/10):

Story Plot (11/11):

Character Development (15/15):

Flow (15/15):

Grammar/Spelling/Etc (20/20): 

Originality (10/10):

Enjoyment (10/10):

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mystomachpain #1
cant believe i forgot about this.
valyria #2
How do you apply as a reviewer?
sun_hi21 #3
Chapter 1: Erm.. hello? Yeah, I would like to have your help in reviewing. I hope you don't mind. :)

Story Title: Picasso
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/950884/picasso-romance-exo-dokyungsoo-ohsehun
Story Description: Hana loves Do Kyungsoo, ever since she saw him 10 years ago, but she knows he sees her only as a younger sister or to be precise as a neighbour.
Focus for the feedback: plot, grammars, characters development, story mood and feels
Anything else you want to say: as this story developing, I'm getting unsure of where will it be going.. so, I need second thought on this. I'm afraid this story is getting lame or boring, so pretty pls point out any lack in the story. I'll appreciate it much if you're willing to take time on reviewing this! Thank u!^^
bangsilhoonie #4
Story title : Let's Have Some Fun
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992780/let-s-have-some-fun-minhyuk-btob-ilhoon
Story description : Me and Minhyuk have a deal. To fulfill each other need without the thing called love. One day when we are having , a fellow member of btob ask to join us and having a . If Minhyuk is okay, why don't i agree? ? Sounds Good.
Focus to feedback : its a short story so no need to focus on anything ^^

I JUST LOVE YOU AND I'LL LOVE YOU SO SO MUCH IF U GIVE FEEDBACK <3~~
endless-sonata #5
Story Title: Learning How To Love
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/932519
Story Description: Jongin comes home one day only to find a young catboy crouching at his doorstep, wearing nothing but an overly size hoodie which reached his milky thigh. With a tiny note in his delicate hand.

Here is my present for you birthday, Nini! Please take a good care of him; he’s still innocent you know, unfortunately. But yeah, you’re allowed to his ; and you will probably enjoy it. I’m quite sure you’ll thank me later for this~ one more thing; appreciate his beauty ;)
- Your pretty princess, Lulu <3

Damn Luhan. His peaceful life is going to be ed up, Jongin just knows it.
Focus for the feedback: plot, character development, grammar/writing, overall enjoyment(?)
Anything else you want to say: nothing, i guess xD thank you c;
MadisonMalaika #6
Story Title: Stray
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/960228/stray-fluff-supernatural-exo--ambw-lay-yixing
Story Description: One rainy Sunday, Mercie decides to take in the stray dog she finds on the side of the road.
Focus for the feedback: Flow, plot, pacing
Anything else you want to say: also stuck on some parts of my plot and where to go next...feedback would be nice!
YJH_beautiful #7
Story Title: That one 'Beauty' for that one 'Beast'
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/938892
Story Description: Love triangle between Yoon Doojoon, Yong Junhyung and You! Doojoon make the first step, but later Junhyung realized how attractive you are. Which one would you choose? How can you solve this love triangle? Can you still be that one 'Beauty' for that one 'Beast'?
Focus for the feedback: Grammar, flow of the story and the overall plot.
Anything else you want to say: I kinda stuck on how to continue writing. Maybe by reading your feedback can give me the new idea ><

Thank you in advance!
Elleonsy_writes #8
Story Title: Fraternal
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/966558/fraternal-angst-exo-university-bts
Story Description: Boys will be boys. Men will be men. And fraternity brothers will always be more than that. Follow the boys of EXO and BTS as they attempt to navigate university and Greek life. Romances will bud, friendships will split, and drama will ensue. You can be sure of that.

Focus for the feedback: Descriptions, language, character interactions, thoughts on plot
Anything else you want to say: I've only got one chapter up so far, so I imagine this will be a very basic review. I plan to come back and get another one once I've got more added to the story.
Thanks in advance!
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