Mathematic in Love

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“I hate mathematic! But… I love mathematic because of you…”

Foreword

Hello^^ I just re-writing FanFiction by me to english because the origin FanFict is in Bahasa Language. Hm... Maybe anyone already read my Fanfict before? Already published in exoshidaeseohan.wordpress.com.
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roro-147 #1
Chapter 1: Cute!!! A bit of mistakes, like he is for men\boys and she is for women\girls, you took a few mistakes on that. And when writing in past tense, try using past verbs like 'held' not 'hold'. One last thing that 'Eyes rounded Luhan heard' part, I think you meant Luhan widen his eyes (?). Well, thanks for the cute story. I hope you could improve and don't do mistakes again. ^^
NanaJin #2
Chapter 1: Kyeopta!! ♥ just little bit mistakes .. his is for boy/man and her is for girl/woman so dont a mistakes again okay ! Hwaiting ♥♥
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