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My first attempt at a one shot. Sorry if it seems a little awkward ;n;. Anyways, enjoy!

5.2k Words.

iRovix
Thank you so much for 100 subs on my first one shot! :)

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Shik_Taek
#1
Chapter 1: I really love this!! And I'm craving for more. I felt sad for Taek being all depressed. And I love Wonshik for being patient and understanding. Well, it was sweet as to how Wonshik just wants Taek to eat and be healthy. Can this have a sequel? ☺☺☺
Madu98 #2
Chapter 1: So beautiful story. It was bit sad but so sweet at the end.
yanohate #3
Chapter 1: goddamn...
pabpaj
#4
Chapter 1: Excellent job, author-nim, on your very first one-shot! YAY!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it so very much! Sweet story! Keep up the great work you are doing and don't doubt yourself too much! Just go with your instinct and don't get bogged down by trying to have everything be perfect. As a fellow perfectionist, I can offer the advice that you will never be fully satisfied with anything you post. But, let your readers guide you with their comments, suggestions and praise! Feedback is the most important part of the writing process, I think! BIG HUGS! Fighting! :) <3
drellenski
#5
Chapter 1: GAHGAHGAH HOW I LOVE ALL OF YOUR WONTAEK'S STORIESSSSS
it's just so lovelyyy. the ending was a bit bitter but so heart-warming nevertheless :"")
keep writing, author-nim!!! hope you have a good day~
a-topp #6
/Sweet , lovely story , don't read this comment yet i don't want to spoil your fun/

I love this , so soft , so sweet. Eventhough at the end they are not together , but i felt fulfill with what they are now.

I suggest , i think the part which describe about how neighbor felt is a bit long. This is just what i think if it irritate you i am sorry.

And i agree the song is awesome. I felt in love with it so hard!
krocket #7
Chapter 1: haha im okay with that, u still my fave author~
fighting author-ssi & keep writing, i'll read that if that is wontaek story and fluff or genre :D