I particularly like how childish Ravi is behaving and that his this demeanor reflects that he is indeed younger than Hakyeon, opposite to how I usually write them, him being, well not necessarily the more mature one, but the more protective one and more rational one? For some reason, I feel like Hakyeon would find it harder to censor his emotions. But, in a way, I can imagine Ravi snapping easily when it comes to people belittling his loved ones. Ain't this a way too serious comment for such a cute and endearing story? Apparently, I get more into details when I'm tired. Anyway, I very much enjoyed it, I'd love to see more navi from you as it is quite rare these days. Thank you for writing it :)