The Boy Who Stays Silent

Description

A LoveSick fanfic

Foreword

We've all been there at least once in our lives;
 
When we could do nothing else but wait...
No matter how long it takes.
When we watch things unfold before us, 
No matter how unbearable it may be.
When there's nothing else to do but pray,
No matter how many times we have prayed before.
When all you can do is sit beside someone and just be there, 
No matter how it may break your heart. 
 
Pete's been there. 
Almost everyday.
Waiting, watching, praying, hurting...
But always hoping.
In silence...  
 
Author's Thoughts
IkhinN21413
Chapter One of The Boy Who Stays Silent is up!
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M9ture #1
Chapter 4: A little peculiar. But you write with class. It needs a little improvement in the grammar. Other than that it's very good. Poetic and very expressive. Good work. I agree with kyuhunnie though, when describing some characters it's confusing sometimes.
fani308 #2
Chapter 4: Love your story so much, keep up the good work :)
Aaesha #3
Chapter 3: OH MY ! My heart just broke for Pete. This story is awesome. Please keep up the good work. :)
kyuhunnie #4
Chapter 1: Hey!
I just wanted to say that i really like what you're writting and the storyline's pretty good. Good job with that! *claps*
But you don't mind if i give you a bit of my opinion, do you?
It's nothing big, really. But the way you address both characters for example pete, as 'the tall boy' is quite confusing. It's not that you cant use it, it is needed at times, but if you use it every single time it gets confusing. Like i don't know who is who. (Or i'm just that slow?) I mean, it's nicer if you could just put their names once in a while. Hehe. Just my opinion though!

Anyway, i'm going to keep reading and i hope you'd update soon. Fighting! ♡
Only1Jae #5
Chapter 3: Poor Pete.
It's a good read. Makes you really feel for Pete ' s situation.
zonpan24 #6
Chapter 3: Pete T T........Poor thing...
I still LOVE u and earn....
It's good to know that I'm not the only one who watches Lovesick....
OamMick is my OTP but EarnPete is //////
Is it weird that I believe that
Pete/August Looks like
Talks like
Smiles like
Same Personality as Yi En Tuan/Mark of GOT7??
matapanda #7
Chapter 3: Oooh pete T.T
mayajay #8
Chapter 3: Looking good :)
matapanda #9
Chapter 2: Thank you for the ff *bighug*
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