Too Close to Home

Description

When Seunghyun watches the music video for "Loser," he realises some very important things a little too late.

Foreword

As a rhetorician, I was completely fascinated by the music video for "Loser." When I started to look at the little details of the video, though, I realized that there were some elements in there that seemed too real - too raw. This one shot is a result.

(I'm still typing it up, so it'll be coming along probably in about an hour or two. Depending on how big it winds up being.)

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Shajah #1 Apr 10, 2016 02:16:58

I haven't even read the story yet and I'm moved to tears by the comments. The comments reflect and I'm sure the story will too, what I think about Daesung. ♡Daesung♡ who can hide a world of pain behind the most beautiful smile.

Min-lili #2 Dec 6, 2015 21:32:49

Chapter 1: T-This was just great...
Dear author, I have to say that I really love this so much. I can't even express how I feel after reading it, DaeSung's part was so painful for me to see but I also loved it. I have to confess that I didn't catch it completely, I only understood the "I'm acting strong but I'm not like that inside" but I felt something was missing... Now that I read your story I got it, what you're saying is true, I didn't pay much attention to his scar but now it makes a lot of sense T-T
His, YoungBae's and Ji Yong's part were the most heartbreaking for me, specially the first two, I'm so glad Dae showed us another part of him apart from his smile I love so much.
I'm sorry if I wrote too much >-< But I needed to, I almost pass out when I was able to put all together.
Thank you again for your awesome fic! <3

lovlessfairy #3 Sep 24, 2015 02:22:29

Chapter 1: First I have to say you are amazing. The way you wrote this piece is really good!
I loved it.
I guess I have no words to tell you how much I loved it. I wish there was more stories like this one, especially because I love Dae!

kumakuma166 #4 Jul 20, 2015 10:26:57

Chapter 1: ㅠ.ㅠ I read the comments for Loser MV and some of them interpreted it. But reading your story is a whole new level of interpretation; you explained the meaning with emotional background..
Heartbreaking? Yes. Tears coming down? Yes

sailoru #5 Jun 2, 2015 01:16:48

Chapter 1: This made me soooo sad.

mikii_yule #6 May 19, 2015 01:41:11

Chapter 1: Oh gawd..I love how you captured the emotions!

musactr56 #7 May 1, 2015 21:30:09

Chapter 1: loved it you really captured the mood of the video and its meaning to me, great job

todaeforlove #8 Apr 30, 2015 21:58:43

Chapter 1: i cried, i ready did cry.... the sentiments are really clear for me.. some part was in my thought since 3 years ago.. you tell it all.. wow ! it's so good story really... i love angst todae the most because it always got my feeling .. so intense. , thank you again... love your writing as away..

nanaxoxoxo #9 Apr 30, 2015 21:05:37

Chapter 1: When i heard the song no im not crying, but when i saw the music video, daesung's part is the most heartbreak one... i cant even stop crying after reading the explanation.

Im agree with you, no matter how smiley daesung is, how many times i watched his program where he go smiley and friendly (i know its a part of him) but i feel we still dont know him so much yet.... he is just so good hiding himself in the back of his smile.. im worried sometimes.. but i hope he can tell all what have been in his mind to other members or his family members...

Anyway another great story from you, i really enjoyed it.

Thank you for the awesome fic!

shaeneice #10 Apr 30, 2015 18:05:55

Chapter 1: wow......you are awesome......