Written Nostalgia

Description

This is what I think when I think of us.

Foreword

WOW haven't written anything in a while. But I'm trying to bounce back :) Here's one

Warning: I have a problem with happy endings

enjoy!

(This is actually an entry for a contest, inspired by one of the prompts provided)

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flawlessey #1
Chapter 1: So heartbreaking yet beautiful! I really love sehun character in this story and can't wait to read your other stories :)
-purplebunny #2
Chapter 1: Woah. This is beautiful. It's wonderfully written and hunber is just so cute. Amazing job~
fallenseiryuu #3
Chapter 1: Wow, this is so bittersweet and hauntingly beautiful. It flows so well, like an extended poem, I loved it!
My only real suggestion is to make it clearer that it's from Sehun's pOV, I thought it was from Amber's until her note and I had to go back and reread it. Maybe it's because I'm a girl so I assumed it was from her POV, so maybe put some more hints near the beginning. Apart from that and some minor grammar mistakes, this is a really lovely read, wonderful job! :)
Chempot #4
Chapter 1: Oh wow...that's really sad. And really good, at the same time. Nice job :)
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