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딸기 키스 / STRAWBERRY KISS — ACube Entertainment's New Girl Group 「 APPLY OPEN 」// deadline undecided yet; finishing reviews

❝reviews let's see what you got ©

❝seol / seo hyunjo sowonheart / authornim / leader, main rapper, vocalist / rapmonster / ♦ / chosen

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this is where i review the whole thing! 

❝kerry / hwang kiyoo missxox / ayana / lead rapper, vocalist / woozi / ♦ / accepted

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Hi Ayana! First of all, thank you for applying. Now, the application. The thing that catches my attention is her first nickname, tho. lol. Our second member for the list of Strawberry Kiss!!! I like the side of her being possessive, since I kinda imagined how she will be when it comes to woozi or something, like she wanna kill or torture someone hahaha but her personality's quite unique, and yaaass she likes Flash like omg he's dreamy, right Kerry?!?!?! lol Her stage monster side is kinda cute (for me lol) because she's pretty nervous at first but once she got onstage, she'll totally slay in performing. And about the third picture, since the debut song is RV's song, you should put the picture who has the same position in RV, yours is Joy. Haha but I don't mind it, though. It's my fault anyway for not clarifying the directions. /slapped. yeah. I chose not to put 'error' on your status (bc most applyfics has those right?) because it's only a teensy one. that sums up everything. haha. I loved your app so far!

❝hyunyoung / lee hyunyoung cocoxoxo/ keayanna / main dancer, lead vocalist / nam joohyuk / ♦ / accepted

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Hi Keayanna! YAY you used my second bias in HV tho. <3 But yeah, first of all, thanks for applying! Hyunyoung is quite... Challenging, I guess? HAHA just kidding. I first thought that Hyunyoung will be the every point of drama in every chapter. That's just my guess, though. Just like the first applicant, she's blunt as well, but it's okay since it's gonna make their story interesting (if she's accepted, of course.) the pikachu aegyo towards the members is pretty funny. I imagined it while they were out and she wants them to buy her something, but her members won't let her then she was like, 'wtf do i have to do this' hahaha. no errors so far. I like your badass character. I smell clashing of attitudes, though. But yeah, anyways, i love it. Thanks again!

❝soojin / yuki umiko moo-lawn1315/ susan / main vocalist, visual / n/a / ♦ / accepted

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hi susan. yuki's app is interesting. i mean, usually applicants had to have a love interest for their character but you chose not to add one. which is i wanna ask why is that you haven't put a love interest for her. and she's so unique about the color blindness and partially deaf part because if a color-blind idol does exist in real, we wouldn't really know his/her struggles, same with the partially deaf part. ahahaha sorry i was just mainly surprised with yuki not having a love interest. but can i have a favor, can you explain how and why she hasn't have one? is it because of a past experience? but anyways, i like your app. i love the uniqueness of the character, and if you are chosen, it would be a first to have a tone-deaf and color-blind idol performing. i bet all eyes are on her after. haha. thanks for applying by the way! and sorry i kept you waiting with the review. y'know, college but is required. lol. i bet every college student knows my struggles as well lol. thanks for waiting! ^^

❝hana / choi hana Layni17 / tsuki / main vocalist, visual / key / ♦ / accepted

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hi tuki! thank you for applying! I thought of hana as the same attitude as Hyunyoung as the point of drama because she has traits that would clash other members' own attitudes. I had to pinpoint that. Since she has a Japanese blood, shouldn't she have a Japanese name given by her father? And I just noticed that you didn't erased the top part or the direction. I add the last of the to-do list there to delete it once it's finished. But yeah, it's just a minor error and you're still accepted. On the love interest part, it was so sweet. Key is my bias so it's a bonus point and the way they interact is cute. THE KISS. YOU HAVE TO INCLUDE THE KISS LIKE OMG MY WEAKNESS. Ugh. Forgive me for that. Hahaha. It's just cute and cringe-worthy. HAHAHA. Anyways, I like your app so you're accepted. ^^

❝kyunggi / seo kyunggi cocoxoxo / keayanna / maknae, rapper, vocalist / b.i /  ♦ / accepted

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Hi again, keayanna! So, on with your app. Oh, first of all, thanks again for applying! Haha. Oh, you used Sehun's friend. lol. I don't know her much but I heard she's pretty good in performing. Btw, I added B.I as your love interest, even though you don't have the love interest part. I just had to. The trivias part! Oh~ The interesting part. I can imagine how seol's ahjumma state when she wakes kyunggi up and made the other members laugh their asses of. haha. oooooh, the rbi one. all in all, i like it as well~ and yeah, thanks for adding seol in your ohana list! Sorry I had to make it short. That means i like your app. like. a lot. hahaha. thanks again!

❝quinn / ahn yerim kiyouni / imma / main vocalist, visual / leo  ♦ / accepted

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Hi imma~ First of all, thank you for applying, and sorry for keeping you hanging with the review for Quinn. Anyways, I love your face claim, by the way. You just chose my second bias in f(x). lol. I cri. But I love how your personality part short but detailed. And she's so like Leo! YOU CHOSE MY BIAS IN VIXX. I hate you. jk. Oooh, she's obsessed with coffee and meat. who wouldn't? like, it's the best things on earth! Aegyo as she wakes up. Aigoo. Leader Seol might melt with that. lol. I agree she's a goddess. A GODDESS INDEED. And I would like to be the tool for reuniting quinn and leo!!! lol just kidding. I love your app! Very short but brief. Thanks again!

❝amelia / amelia jieun williams xINeedUx / nicole / maknae, vocalist, rapper / vernon / ♦ /  accepted

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omg shannon. huhuhuhu. hi, btw. thanks for applying! yay another one with a very short but brief personality. it's very realistic since she is a half-european but yeah... it's cute! your face claim is cute! i am loving shannon the past few days and her song 'why why' is like... running on my head for days. lol. gasp vernon!!!!! double killed me :( the interaction are just cute huhuhuhu can i just ship shannon and vernon? lol. anyways, the app was good! I enjoyed reading it, especially the love interest relationship history!!! hahaha. Thanks again!

❝livy / song minah whateverL / mel / lead rapper, vocalist / jooyoung / ♦ / accepted

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Hiiii. I must say that your app so colorful. lol. It's so neon, but cute! First of all, thank you for applying! And yaaay, you used Kisum! She's one of my favorite rappers and she fits the position well! I love how her personality part had been written, like what i said for the 2 above you, it's short but brief, which I liked. The relationship part is so cute! and most of the parts that require details had been given the details that I needed. I love it how she ended at YG then down to ACube! I like her with her slight tomboyness because I've been there before. The one-of-the-boys of the gang! all in all, I love your app, also! KISUM <3 Hahaha. Thanks again!

❝blaze / dae choonhee Shygirl101 / yumi / main dancer, lead vocalist / hyunseung / ♦ / accepted

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Hi, Yumi! Thanks for applying, btw! Now on with your app. I ain't putting you to errors but I would like you to fix some things. :) First is the text above the pictures on your app, it should be deleted once you are done. Aaaand, re-comment your app to the turn-in blog I provided. :) That would be all. Anyways, your app is in first POV! I am not much used to it, but it is well explained, anyway. I think it's much easier to express while in that POV right? YAY YOU USED PONY. She's my favorite Ulzzang <3 But the traits were explained clearly and it's as if choonhee were being interviewed thoroughly. The relationship history is cute, though. Hyunseung sees Choonhee as Hyuna and that was the started of their meeting. OH GOSH the status... RATED M! RATED M! Lol. I love your daring character! XD Hahahaha. I don't know what to do, so.... Thanks again! o/////u//////o

❝jj / jang jisoo heebumdae / scotty / main vocalist, visual / baekhyun / ♦ / pending

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Hi scotty!!! YOU USED YERIN I CRI.... Thank you for your patience~ Your review will be up soon~

❝joan / joo ahn  Myugin / nael / main dancer, lead vocalist / n/a / ♦ / pending

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Hi nael! Thanks for your patience! Your review will be up soon~

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Layni17
#1
I'm very sorry, I'll be pulling my application because I'm not satisfied with it any more. Thank you for the opportunity however. <3
moo-lawn1315
#2
Chapter 6: That's really cute
lol locking the door so you can eat in peace
I can't wait for the story to start
Shygirl101
#3
Chapter 6: lol I find this teaser humorous! Losing her for 2 hours while she was just practicing XD
whateverL
#4
Chapter 6: Well, that was cute. ^.^
kiyouni
#5
Chapter 3: thank you for the review, authornim.
i was busy with work too so it's okay. haha.
thank you for liking quinn, tbh leo is my bias too and krystal is my bias in f(x). hihi
i just thought krystal would fit quinn's personality and of course ice princess to ice prince. <3
again, thank you so much.
-yeonjungs
#6
Chapter 3: thank for the review.... again... lol!
Layni17
#7
Chapter 3: Hey, I just wanted to tell you I fixed the top part (I'll be honest, I forgot it existed since that's usually the first thing I do after doing everything it tells me right off the bat), and actually, Hana is ALSO a Japanese name, meaning flower. But if you don't like it, then her name could be Ayame, Narumi, Rena, Aika, Suzu, or Satoko, since those were the other options.
-yeonjungs
#8
Chapter 4: tbh this was one of the best teasers ever. it's like a real chapter and i love the way you write and how everything looks so professionally done.
moo-lawn1315
#9
Chapter 4: great teaser
i absolutely loved it
it was great and it makes me anticapate for
the story to start