Evanescent Haven

Description

Just like an evanescent haven, happiness doesn't last long enough when you get more attached to a person.

 

Foreword

PROLOGUE

Would you rather smell like poop and not know it, or, constantly be smelling poop when nobody smells it?" Krystal lifted her head to look at the owner of the voice. Well that's a new way of saying hello which she was certainly not amused with. She was even more annoyed to think that he had the nerve to ask such question when he failed the basic manner of being punctual.

 

“Lee Jongsuk” The boy introduced himself as he pulled the chair next to her. Upon noticing his wide grin, Krystal found herself fighting the urge to throw a water bottle at his face and watch him cry like a baby afterwards.

 

“You’re late.” she glared at him. Jongsuk swore that he could almost picture a fierce flame of fire behind her, accompanied with classical background music, often used in horror movies.

 

His lips dried as he tried to crack an excuse. “I was here twenty minutes ago but my peni- I mean my private part just can’t hold it in so, I walked back to the toilet.” he waited for her reaction. After assuming that she was not satisfied with his lame excuse, he added a teeny bit of a white lie. “And when I reached there, the toilet was closed for cleaning. Being a civilized student, I don’t think it’s right to just pee at any tree or drain so I… waited.”

 

Krystal rolled her eyes at his stupid statement. Seeing as to how bickering with this lad would be just a waste of her precious saliva, she decided to commence instead. 

 

“Which one do you think came first? Egg or chicken?” She lifted her right eyebrow in respond. “Aren’t you curious? Like why is water, water you know? Of course not that lame scientific terms like; water consist of a molecule of hydrogen an-"

 

“Two atoms.”  She corrected him. "Okay, let's get back to studying" This time Jongsuk had no choice but to listen. He was originally here for a library blind date. Jongsuk mentally screamed in joy when he noticed her sitting alone. Too bad, she was actually meeting for her mentee but, it doesn't hurt for him to lie a bit, right?

 


Credits:

1.My first reviewer, Mystical Butterfly, I'll try to improve! (79/100)

2. Purple Swag Advertisement Shop for helping my story to be known.

3. AYO Graphic for the amazing bg and poster! (Ps: There's no rule for their service ;))

98dreamer
Massive adjustment done to the story. Hopefully it's better now

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jsoojungah #1
I was hoping for a jongstal story but I guess the label angst isn't there for nothing. anyways, I really enjoyed the fic. you captured the love and hate feelings that Jongsuk had for Krystal perfectly.

I hope you'll make a happy ending jongstal fic soon. I just love this pairing so much lol
hellofanfics
#2
Chapter 4: ???I'm so sorry but I don't understand this story at all... so what happened to kyrstal? Who is jongsuk?
Lovely_us #3
Chapter 3: As a past reviewer, I just want to say that even though you seem to use a wide variety of vocabulary, it seems forced? Lol. You switch up your tenses, which should be consistent. I also feel that you don't know where to place certain words.

For example, "Her voice rose every second..."

This isn't correct but I know what you meant. Maybe try rearranging the format of your sentences? When you say that aloud, doesn't it sound weird? Often times, reading aloud can really help. I'd say more but I'm sure a review shop would do better with explaining.
JungKrystall
#4
Chapter 3: Wowww this is interesting... So the blonde guy is kris..