Do you love me?

Description

Hakyeon is always the cheerful one, the one initiating anything between their relationship, cuddles, kisses, hugs, and always the first to say I love you.

Taekwoon is always the quiet one, the shy one, the one returning the ‘I love you’s less frequently and with less volume.

What happens when Hakyeon’s insecurities get ahold of him, and makes him doubt their relationship? What will Taekwoon do then, to save them, to save their love? Or is everything Hakyeon thought it would be, their love from Taekwoon’s perspective?

Foreword

This is actually what I imagined would happen during the early stages of their relationship, with Hakyeon being insecure, and Taekwoon being the ever silent shy one he is. Before all the understanding and the speaking-with-eyes stage of their relationship. Because Hakyeon is a sensitive insecure babo and Taekwoon is, well Taekwoon.

 

PS: hint of fluff if you squint and long author's note down there. Not proofread by the way. Cause if I did, this would really be in the scrap pile and not here.

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90sLineLover #1
Chapter 1: You wouldn't know how many times i read this story but still haven't got tired of it..this is soooo sweet!!! I love so much.
CaptainHanbae
#2
Chapter 1: so cute and lovely~
mistressofsecrecy1 #3
Chapter 1: wow sorry for the mini-essay :D
mistressofsecrecy1 #4
Chapter 1: okay first your author note really talks about what I feel about 'love and all that...i think people who can surely say they are in love are very...courageous? people who are able to open themselves up and build a good relationship , stay together for a long time and everything are just ...amazing 'cause even if I'm young, I can never open myself up to anyone like that ...mayb e soem here , some tere but not the eventually open book person one can have the opportunity to become with a 'loved' one ... so yeah
and I think I rememeber thinking when I read this before (yes I read your A/N 'cause I love them :P) like even then, Wy do you call this brain vomit? Its great! You know it would be so hard to write even this much for some people (liek me) who aren't good with expressing and can only read or listen :P ;) so don't i mean of course we are our worst crtics (or sth , read that somewhere) but still :) <3 you are lovely like the person who commented (?) before me said... :) and I hope your exams are going well!!! :D

as for this...I think I already told you but I personally loved how it turned into a blubbery mess haha i was a bit surprised by Taek speaking up but I guess that's what made me love this more :) <3
ooh yeah now that I read through it...the fortress thing ...I couldn't help but chuckle...lol it was like okay blubbery mess, confession and all of a sudden dramatic wording ...lol but i LOVED IT!!! (so don't call it brain vomit :P ;) )
yeah I remember now...i loved this fic and wanted to ramble about all this...the emotions the funny, in my opinion, ending (well um not funny but just lol yeah idk how to say it) and just the LOve oh the love lalalalove (I'm not high :P ) yeah anyway


THANKS FOR WRITING THIS :D Its lovely ^_^ and again, hope your exams are going well ;)
pabpaj
#5
Chapter 1: I would never bash you, author-nim! You keep writing when you can to flex those creative muscles. And good luck with your studies. Truly. I mean it. The fact that you can find any time at all to share your stories with us is truly amazing. Now, this story was good! Who cares if you didn't get to proofread it. The content comes first in my opinion. Great content and meaning. You do a great job with your writing AND your shipping. I really enjoyed this story. Very sweet and a little angst never hurt anyone. Love Neo so much! Now you stop doubting yourself. That's an order. YOU are smart, capable and talented. No more apologizing for what you write. Be brave and put it all out there, hon. Loyal fans will be with you no matter what. Ciao! Until next time.... be well and take care of yourself while studying and working hard for your dreams! :) <3
Byulbit321
#6
Chapter 1: LOVED IT! your writing is awsum!
Umysun #7
Chapter 1: OMN... It's sad and in sometimes it's sweet.... :D
Velzonly #8
Chapter 1: Woah this fic, i like it!! This is sweet asdfghjkl ~ good luck on your exam and your note, i agree with you pov about reality ~ anw pls comeback soon after you finish with your exam ^^
DesdemonaDeLaMort #9
Chapter 1: I really liked this fic ^^
I think that you captured the emotions well. It seemed like exactly what you said it was, like how they were in the beginning of their relationship before they understood each other better. I could really see that.
Don't worry about it being sad and making them cry! I love these kinds of stories. So angsty and so many emotions. I mean anything with Neo is going to be great lol
Thanks for writing ^-^
VIXX_theheavenlygirl
#10
Chapter 1: I'm being honest but your story is nice. At least you put your effort writing this story! :)