A Flower in the Ocean

Description

Luhan wakes up in the hospital after attempting suicide, he can't remember why he did it or what events could have lead up to it. With the support of his group he seems to be getting better, but it's only a matter of time before the small flower adrift in the waters is swallowed up by black waves once more.
 

 

Foreword

➻✾ A Flower In the Ocean

Genre: Angst, drama, romance 

Rating: R 

Couples/Pairings: Slight Kai/Luhan, one-sided Xiumin/Luhan, potentially Kris/Luhan

Beta: Needed

Warnings: Attempted suicide, minor depictions of violence, character death.

Summary: 

"Luhan was happy with EXO, it wasn’t the fairytale he had thought it would be during his trainee days but he was happy nonetheless. “Why, Luhan? Why would you do that?” Kyungsoo question was saturated with tears and mild hysteria, and it was echoed in Luhan’s own heart. He could only look at Kyungsoo as he dissolved into sobs, he had no answer to give him because he simply didn’t know, and the darkness in his mind was still as silent as ever."

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A/N: I am not sure if I will keep this as a one-shot or extend it into something longer. It will depend on feed-back and my inspiration. Also, I am looking for a beta, if anyone is interested.

 

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AizuUzia #1
Chapter 1: Oh my god...
Cutedongli #2
Chapter 1: Please continue
1jagiya #3
Oh nooooooooooooo.. It hit me when luhan returned and greeted Kris at the dorm and I just knew then that the rest were gone. Literally just paused to breathe before continuing. Holy cow please continue, if you do you have a reader in me!
LuhanSa #4
Chapter 1: You should totally continue this!!
pencileraser #5
Chapter 1: Did you really just-
NO!! @#$%^*&
Okay. I need to rant. This story is beautiful (besides few grammar errors, run-ons). I love how you focused on each individual member separately and characterized everyone so well. Your writing also gave out the different relationships that Luhan shared with the members, and the other members with each other. And the details! The storyline! The transition from angst to lighter angst, almost fluffy, to, once again, full-on angst was very smooth and well written. That ending hit me harder than a train. I also noticed how you used the same metaphor at the beginning and end of this story, and I think that helped with the impact of the ending.
This gave me so much feels, so thank you and well done, author.
By the way, I think this story is fine as it is. Of course, it's entirely your choice whether to develop this story into a longer fanfic.
kogane_no_kitsune #6
Chapter 1: whether you decide to continue or not, this was good. i especially enjoyed your characterizations, and your writing style is very poetic. great sense of grammar, pleasing to read overall ^^
taedaebae #7
Chapter 1: I like this so much.
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