the chaser

late like thunder

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jongdae flashes down to earth in an instant, white static flickering around his shiny black boots. he takes a slight pause to let loose his discharge, but count to three and he's already gone, sweeping off to his next destination.

 

kyungsoo flashes down with a crash and a bang. he's three seconds too late.

 

"why?" he asks joonmyun's million faces, falling falling down to the ground.

 

"you're thunder," the puddle at his feet tells him. "you can never meet him, you may only follow in his footsteps."

 

"why?" he wails to the sky. "why can baekhyun embrace him each time he falls? why can sehun play with his sparks? why can chanyeol be born from his fingertips? why can you all meet him while i can only be forever three seconds behind?"

 

he doesn't know why but he starts crying, fat tears falling down his cheeks. in an instant, joonmyun is beside him, swiping cool fingers under his eyes.

 

"kyungsoo," joonmyun whispers, "you mustn't stop now. your heart may ache and your tears may fall, but little thunder, you must follow him. there's a time and place for this, but this is not it! go, please!"

 

kyungsoo glares balefully at the puddle. "i've followed him for thousands of years, and yet -" he chokes on a sob, "no, you're right, i'll just- i'll just go do my duty then!"

 

the thunder spirit angrily brushes away his tears and leaps back up into the sky, continuing the chase after his master, steel-toed boots leaving loud rumbling thunder in his wake.

 

chanyeol, birthed in a tree when jongdae touched the earth scorches the leaves around him merrily. his flames crackle and bend in a blazing halo around his head, seemingly unbothered by the water drizzling down on him. "he seems rather lonely, doesn't he?"

 

joonmyun spins around, not registering the fire spirit's presence until he spoke. "chanyeol!"

 

chanyeol grins at joonmyun, waving a hand in greeting, "wotcher joonie!" by then, chanyeol had spread to another tree to continue feeding his insatiable flames. the two tree's forms started to wither and blacken under the hungry fire spirit but he seems to either not take notice of this, nor care.

 

"stop that! you'll burn up this whole forest!" joonmyun plants his hands on his hips and flings droplets at the fire spirit to keep him in check, ignoring the slightly pained yelp. "lonely? what do you mean, lonely? he may be pining, but he's got us, his friends!"

 

chanyeol is surprisingly silent, seemingly weighing the words in his mind before speaking them out. this is rare for the impulsive spirit and joonmyun finds himself anticipating what the normally troublesome spirit has to say.

 

"joonmyun," chanyeol finally says, "what's a crowd when the one you want isn't by your side?"

 

joonmyun blinks as chanyeol smiles one more time before he finally succumbs to joonmyun's raindrops falling on him from above. smoke rises from the charred trees and joonmyun wonders where the fire spirit is headed to next. he crooks a finger and a whisper sounds in his ear as sehun winds obediently around the water spirit.

 

"i'll go talk to him."

 

joonmyun hopes that one day kyungsoo will find his own happiness.

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catinabamboohat
so so so sorry but i've hit major writer's block with this fic. i really can't say when i'll update this but i really do want to finish this :p

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Arashika #1
Chapter 7: I'm sorry I was going to give a serious comment but douchecanoe
Not really sorry indeed don't be sorry I can't stop laughing give me a moment to get back to semi-seriousness before I give you a proper comment

Ok, I'm calm. Kind of. Douchecanoe. Crap. Brb.

I need to stop.

Ok. I'm really enjoying this story so far! I love the way you've characterized everyone, the Krisoo interaction at the beginning was adorable. I'm currently in love with Yixing and Luhan and Minseok oh my god I can't deal with this this was so refreshing though after all the pining from Kyungsoo :(

It is really sad that Kyungsoo is always left to chase after Jongdae, always just a few steps behind, always wanting to meet him but never having the chance. I do wonder though, how come he wants to know Jongdae at all? Why is it he seems to love Jongdae when they've never met? How did they even become these elemental spirits in the first place? How come Kyungsoo can't meet Jongdae when they're not working as spirits, since he was able to meet Sehun and Baekhyun without some elemental force causing the meeting? I'm curious why it is that they're so segregated when it seems like the spirits can meet outside of their element.

I'm also very curious what Jongin's element is. I really wonder what's up with him, that he's trying to keep Jongdae away from Kyungsoo too. What's he up to? Hmm...

This story is amazing! I'm really enjoying the way it's written, and the way scenes are split. Personally, I wouldn't make every scene change into a separate chapter, but that's my personal style and this works just fine as well. I'm so curious as to what's going to happen next, and I can't wait to find out :D

Thanks for sharing this story with us! Take your time in writing, I hope that the story will be finished in future but don't feel pressured, do it at your own pace :D

Great job, keep writing~
the_rising_wolves
#2
Chapter 7: in love with this fanfic tbh 10/10
arandomperson #3
What is kaikai gonna do
Heavenlee
#4
I can't wait for more! This is so good! Will they ever talk to each other face-to-face... And Jongin, he seems deviou!
chizu_ya #5
Chapter 6: Why kai tell jongdae that kyungsoo is dangerous? Can't wait to find out,,,
Cause_life_told_me #6
Chapter 3: This story is so cool!!! I can't wait to see what happens, EEEEEE let it begin!!! xD
thosecookies
#7
subscribed! bcoz it looks great! :D