The Guy Who Bumped Into You

Description

This is a story mostly about you. I don't write other character's point of view (P.O.V) because if I do write about it, it will make you guess what will happen next easily. So, just sit back, relax and read. This is my first fanfic, hope you don't mind my bad or wrong grammar. Thank you.

Foreword

"Read my lips, I want an O-U-T. An OUT! I'm over with you! Get it?"  Omma raised her voice, arguing with appa.

 

"This is the reason why I hate you so much! You never learn to lend your ear to my explanation just for a while!" Appa slapped omma and that made you shock in tears.

 

You and TOP were hiding behind the couch, listening to your parents' argument. TOP told you to close your ears because he knows that you can have panic attack easily. He hugged you tightly in his arms.

 

"Oppa, I don't want appa and omma fight-fight." You cried silently.

 

"Don't worry  you. I will always protect you, I promise." He carried you and brought you to his room.

 

 

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Appa waked TOP and you.

 

"Hello my little angel. Why did you sleep with your oppa today, huh huh? Where's the monster under your bed? RAWR!" Appa tickled you and you laughed so hard.

 

"Oh! Where's omma?" You asked and he stop tickling you and gave you a little smile.

 

"Omma is packing your clothes. You and omma are going to move to London. You will be growing up there without appa and oppa arasso?" He replied.

 

"Yah, Appa!  you is only 8 years old! Mom never take good care of us before. She always beat her!" TOP remind Appa.

 

 

"And you are only 10 years old. You can't say all those words. Your mother is a good mother." He tried to ignore oppa and said, " you, go take your shower. You are going to be on an airplane. Woooo~" He carried you up high and fly you like an airplane then kissed you on your forehead.

 

 

"OK!" You hopped to the bath room with an innocent grin on your face.

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lovekpopalot #1
Finish reading it!!
o_OchonsaO_o
#2
Thank you :D
Iheartlife #3
omg! This was so funny and cute! ^_^
o_OchonsaO_o
#4
lovekpopalot: Gumawo! :)<br />
Bungsky: Yes he is but not in real life. Hahaha, he's not :D<br />
nwatanabe: Haha, omo I just realized that ._. GUMAWO :D<br />
BelleBae: :)<br />
daydreamergirl11: Thank you so much for your support and sorry for the bad ending.<br />
---BaboMich: Omo, gumawo! :) Thank you for spending your time on reviewing my story. Thank you so much. Could you please tell me where my mistakes were? ^^
---BaboMich #5
Hi ! I'm here to review your story since you requested my services last month c:<br />
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Anyways, a very cure plot going on here; no complaints about that. Secondly, your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Everything is fine and dandy, although there are a few mistakes here and there.<br />
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Good work !
daydreamergirl11
#6
I loved the way it ended but I am sad that it had to end!!!
nwatanabe #7
aigoo! being in a gay situation feels really akward.. hhahaha.. i mean keeping hyunjoong as a gay( the secret thing) feels a litlleee akwarddd.. hahahaha... im happy though to be a part of this ff.. :D
Bungsky
#8
Aigo, hyunjoong is a gay? And... Dont tell me that Top too? Aigo aigo *surprised*
lovekpopalot #9
I love it so much!! :D