Winter Night Dreams

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First Impression [7/10] :: You did tell me that you have recently started making graphics. For a beginner, I think you got a good place ahead of you. Just the right teaching and practice will get you to a good spot. My first impression was light, romancy, fluff. When I first looked at it, I felt that it was imcomplete. I felt like there could be more.
Mood/Genre [8/10] :: I thought this was a light romance with fluff, but you told me your main aspect was winter. I don't get the sense of winter. I live in Michigan where it has snowed literally 6 months in a row non-stop, so winter to me is bitter. I think that you were giving winter the softer side and I think that was nice. I think winter has a white, pale blue color scheme whereas you put pinks, reds, purples, and blues. I think that is why I couldn't tell it was a winter-themed graphic.
Pictures [6.8/10] :: The OC you used was a great choice for this graphic while Kai's photo is a bit off. I think there are better photos of him to choose from. When I see this graphic, I want to imagine them look at each other. With those faces you chose, the way they are looking at each other is more flirty and not a "winter night's dream." Honestly, I don't have a big problem with his photo. I think you chose a good one, but I just feel like there is something better. I believe that you tried to make your images face away from each other, but looking the same way. That was a smart way to go. I could already tell you got some ideas expanding in your brain. I really want you to focus on how the characters flow with each other. Kai's photo is darker than your OC's photo which makes it utterly unbalanced. I woul

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