CavityFree Reviews

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No sugarcoating!

Foreword

As the description suggests, this shop is focused not on appearances but on the story content itself. If you would genuinely like to improve your writing, then we are very happy to help!

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suzyelf
#1
Chapter 1: Title: The War of Dream & Paper
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/943166/the-war-of-dream-paper-hyuk-vixx-ken-sanghyuk-jaehwan-hyuken
Scored review (longer) or just general comments (shorter): longer
Anything specific you'd like us to comment on as we perform your cleaning: Nothing specific
Anything else (warnings, disclaimers, explanations, playlists, etc.): nope. Thanks in advance!
SarAdleen
#2
Chapter 1: Title: No.
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/853783/no-romance-originalcharacter-exo-exok-sehun-ohsehun
Scored review (longer) or just general comments (shorter): Scored review, so I will know precisely how much the story lacks of everything that it lacks of (?)
Anything specific you'd like us to comment on as we perform your cleaning: Tell me everything that needs to be cleaned
Anything else (warnings, disclaimers, explanations, playlists, etc.): Contains , I hope it's alright. If it's not, you can ignore my request ;)

Thank you!
Nictaeny9
#3
Title: Dark Ties
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-jessica-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

would you like us to nitpick a lot on your grammar?: No problem

Specifics: Characterization

scored review please. :)
daydreamer23 #4
Chapter 1: Title: Road of Trust
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/638948/road-of-trust-adventure-fantasy-friendship-supernatural-exo
Scored review
Would you like us to nitpick a lot on your grammar?: Yes
Anything specific you'd like us to comment on as we perform your cleaning: Descriptions, transitions, and character development

I have requested, thank you.
Scored review (longer) or just general comments (shorter):
Would you like us to nitpick a lot on your grammar?:
Anything specific you'd like us to comment on as we perform your cleaning:
Nictaeny9
#5
Chapter 1: Hi, I'm interested in submitting a review but my story is currently incomplete. Would you be willing to give it a go?